Amber Alert
1-7-1 contest62 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent job with this beauty. I was going to recommend changing the words, but then I read the instruction and you have done it exactly right!!!
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest with this absolute delight.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Excellent job with this beauty. I was going to recommend changing the words, but then I read the instruction and you have done it exactly right!!!
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest with this absolute delight.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hi Gloria, thank you so much for a wonderful review you....and thank you for alllll your wonderful stars...this is a serious subject in our world today...not just for kids...but everyone...thank you...
Comment from MissMerri
A timely message Linda... It is something every mother fears.. a child being snatched away by a stranger. I think it is definitely good advice for any child, but the sad thing is, then a well meaning, grandfatherly type talks to a little girl and she is afraid because of what she has been taught. Sad world we live in.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A timely message Linda... It is something every mother fears.. a child being snatched away by a stranger. I think it is definitely good advice for any child, but the sad thing is, then a well meaning, grandfatherly type talks to a little girl and she is afraid because of what she has been taught. Sad world we live in.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Adonna, it truly is a sad world...I wish these people would just wake up and stop...you hate to scare the kids like that...but better to have then scared...the killed...it's not just the kids...it's everyone...thank you for a wonderful review....
Comment from MsPetra
You held true to form. You had a great message here. I can see the thought behind it. This one will linger in my mind and I might just share it with my nieces. Thank you for writing it.
There isn't anything I would change. You did a great job.
Please keep writing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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You held true to form. You had a great message here. I can see the thought behind it. This one will linger in my mind and I might just share it with my nieces. Thank you for writing it.
There isn't anything I would change. You did a great job.
Please keep writing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI MsPetra, thank you so much for a wonderful review...it truly is sad we have to go as far as scaring our kids to protect them...but better safe than sorry....and it's not just the children...it is everyone...thank you
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello l.raven, a good 1-7-1 poem and reminder. Of special note ... "RUN". It is really sad that we must teach our children to be on alert of strangers, but with evil lurking almost everywhere, this is something that we must do. A timely poem. Great complementary artwork choice. Good luck in the contest. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hello l.raven, a good 1-7-1 poem and reminder. Of special note ... "RUN". It is really sad that we must teach our children to be on alert of strangers, but with evil lurking almost everywhere, this is something that we must do. A timely poem. Great complementary artwork choice. Good luck in the contest. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI LateBloomer, so good to see you...it truly is sad we have to put that fear in our kids...better to let them know...and it's not just the kids...it's everyone...anyone...thank you for a wonderful review...and for all your luck...
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and very good advice given by a parent in this day and age nowhere is safe for a child or adult anywhere good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Yes this is well written and very good advice given by a parent in this day and age nowhere is safe for a child or adult anywhere good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Jill, that is what I have been saying...it's not just the kids...no one is safe...but it is so sad we have to scare them to protect them...thank you so much for a great review...and for all your good luck...
Comment from rjuselius
Were you supposed to enter the 1-7-1 contest since you have the same format? A fine poem yet a little bit lacks content.
Thanks for sharing dear linda!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Were you supposed to enter the 1-7-1 contest since you have the same format? A fine poem yet a little bit lacks content.
Thanks for sharing dear linda!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Rebekka, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...Blessing to you...
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh how kids need to know this message! How many children could be saved if enough people passed this around. They used to do it in elementary school a lot, but it doesn't seem to be stressed the way it once was. Put this on a poster and plaster it everywhere!
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Oh how kids need to know this message! How many children could be saved if enough people passed this around. They used to do it in elementary school a lot, but it doesn't seem to be stressed the way it once was. Put this on a poster and plaster it everywhere!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Rhonda, I agree with you...they need the stress this with the kids today...it is so said we have to scare our kids to protect them...so sad...thank you for a wonderful review...and you take care as well...
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But we do have to, or else they become victims.
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so true...sigh...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good wording and the picture you chose for this piece went so well with it. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good wording and the picture you chose for this piece went so well with it. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Teri, thank you so much for a great review....so glad you like it....it is so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...everyone...thank you for your best wishes...and Blessings to you as well...
Comment from MizKat
Hi Linda,
This poem is really interesting to read and I enjoyed it.
You are so good at writing all kinds of things which are always great.
Thanks for sharing this with me and I'll be looking for more.
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hi Linda,
This poem is really interesting to read and I enjoyed it.
You are so good at writing all kinds of things which are always great.
Thanks for sharing this with me and I'll be looking for more.
Kat
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Kitty Kat, thank you so very much for a great review...it is so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...thank you so much
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You're very welcome. Kat
Comment from azwildrosa
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This is a great little poem you have here. It simple with so much to say with so few words. The picture you chose is also a perfect fit. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Comment on this post.
This is a great little poem you have here. It simple with so much to say with so few words. The picture you chose is also a perfect fit. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Rosa, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...
