Amber Alert
1-7-1 contest62 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
Yes, run, very good on the prompt run and don't talk to strangers.this should do well. a good one. best of luck on this, have a great day
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Yes, run, very good on the prompt run and don't talk to strangers.this should do well. a good one. best of luck on this, have a great day
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI William, thank you for a great review...and thank you for all the luck...have a great day as well...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Run like the wind, kid, and don't look back.
Scream like you're being branded, while yelling "HELP ME!!!" at the top of your little lungs.
Do like Forrest Gump once did, and Run, Jenny, RUN!
Good luck in the 1-7-1 contest, Anonymous Author.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Run like the wind, kid, and don't look back.
Scream like you're being branded, while yelling "HELP ME!!!" at the top of your little lungs.
Do like Forrest Gump once did, and Run, Jenny, RUN!
Good luck in the 1-7-1 contest, Anonymous Author.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Dean, when I first wrote this that is what I though of...didn't have enough wording space to write it...thank you so much for a great review you...so glad you like it...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A chilling warning to all children with a stranger on the lose, I like the style of the poem with the capital letter emphasis, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A chilling warning to all children with a stranger on the lose, I like the style of the poem with the capital letter emphasis, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Dolly, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...my granddaughter is starting another one...love Linda and Abby...xxoo
Comment from sunnilicious
Parents/family, friends, teachers, clergy are suppose to say, "Don't talk to strangers".Omg, this short poem is scary. I moved California and AmberAlerts go off once in a while on my iPhone. It's heart-wrenching every time too. I pray all the bad people will find a way to turn good. How to give everybody an epiphany into holding good values of right and wrong dear to their hearts.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Parents/family, friends, teachers, clergy are suppose to say, "Don't talk to strangers".Omg, this short poem is scary. I moved California and AmberAlerts go off once in a while on my iPhone. It's heart-wrenching every time too. I pray all the bad people will find a way to turn good. How to give everybody an epiphany into holding good values of right and wrong dear to their hearts.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Alicia, it truly is scary...like you I pray these people will wake up and stop....thank you for a wonderful review...God Bless...
Comment from angel123
Your 1-7-1 poem flows with an important message about kid safety. I like your artwork choice and I enjoyed reading your poem.
angel123
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Your 1-7-1 poem flows with an important message about kid safety. I like your artwork choice and I enjoyed reading your poem.
angel123
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Angel, thank you so much for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...we live in scary times...and not just for kids...thank you....
Comment from closetpoetjester
Great advice!
And all wrapped up in just 8 syllables. I've drilled my kids on exactly what to do and unfortunately these days they have to be well aware of stranger danger.
With that said, they have also been advised that not all strangers that speak to them have an ulterior motive.
It's definitely a mine field and fine line between wrapping them in cotton wool and letting them out to experience life on their own.
Well done!
Cheers P
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Great advice!
And all wrapped up in just 8 syllables. I've drilled my kids on exactly what to do and unfortunately these days they have to be well aware of stranger danger.
With that said, they have also been advised that not all strangers that speak to them have an ulterior motive.
It's definitely a mine field and fine line between wrapping them in cotton wool and letting them out to experience life on their own.
Well done!
Cheers P
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Phillippa, I did the same thing to my kids....never say never....RUN....it's not just kids...anyone...we live in some scary times...thank you for a wonderful review...later
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. In just a few words you have written a very good message to children Know if they will just remember it is another matter. You completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. In just a few words you have written a very good message to children Know if they will just remember it is another matter. You completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Winnona, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it....children have to be so careful today...anyone has to...thank you...
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Linda, what an excellent contest entry. Love the picture showing the predator with the colorful sucker in his back pocket. Stalking the little girl. Perfect advice for every child, just run if a stranger approaches you. I want to wish you good luck in this contest, Linda! Take care my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim xxx
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Linda, what an excellent contest entry. Love the picture showing the predator with the colorful sucker in his back pocket. Stalking the little girl. Perfect advice for every child, just run if a stranger approaches you. I want to wish you good luck in this contest, Linda! Take care my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim xxx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Jim, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...take care...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This one is truly a winner. Excellent idea for the 1-7-1 contest and with the news the way it is, it makes the advice perfect and the need for more reminding about the monsters
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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This one is truly a winner. Excellent idea for the 1-7-1 contest and with the news the way it is, it makes the advice perfect and the need for more reminding about the monsters
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Barb, I hope so...thank you so much for a great review you...we live in scary times for children...for anyone...I wish these kind of people would wake up and stop...thank you
Comment from lyenochka
The title caught my eye because I just got an amber alert last night. It is a fantastic system for helping find abducted kids. Good condensed quote to fit in the 7 syllables of the main line!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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The title caught my eye because I just got an amber alert last night. It is a fantastic system for helping find abducted kids. Good condensed quote to fit in the 7 syllables of the main line!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Lyenochka, I just got one a few days ago...it is a wonderful thing they do that...but so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...thank you so much for a great review....
