Amber Alert
1-7-1 contest62 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow! Your few words convey the urgency of the Amber alert well.
Good job on the style. The picture is perfect.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Wow! Your few words convey the urgency of the Amber alert well.
Good job on the style. The picture is perfect.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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HI Jan, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your best wishes...God Bless Linda xxoo
Comment from DR DIP
Ah the old stranger Danger..this time not boiled lollies but a lolly pop
Pedophilia is still prevalent in the world is especially in the cyber world and social networking. Facebook put an age limitation of 14 to have a facebook account and I can see why.
Strong warning words thank you for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Ah the old stranger Danger..this time not boiled lollies but a lolly pop
Pedophilia is still prevalent in the world is especially in the cyber world and social networking. Facebook put an age limitation of 14 to have a facebook account and I can see why.
Strong warning words thank you for sharing
dip
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Dr,Dip, thank you so much for a wonderful review you...it's not just the kids that are in danger...it is everyone...thank you my friend...and you are sooooo welcome...take care
Comment from Cory G
Effective poem for so few words and the picture you chose is absolutely perfect for your topic -kinda' eerie! I like how you were able to use dialogue too. "Run" is definitely the best way to avoid an amber alert, if you can. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Effective poem for so few words and the picture you chose is absolutely perfect for your topic -kinda' eerie! I like how you were able to use dialogue too. "Run" is definitely the best way to avoid an amber alert, if you can. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Cory, thank you for a wonderful review...they get harder with fewer words...thank you for your good luck...
Comment from LIJ Red
The rules and form for a one slash seven slash one are quite clear and simple, and
scarcely lend themselves to sweeping poetic sagas. This one looks just fine to me.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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The rules and form for a one slash seven slash one are quite clear and simple, and
scarcely lend themselves to sweeping poetic sagas. This one looks just fine to me.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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thank you so very much LIJ...so glad you like it...
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi,
I am anything but a poet, seldom attempt to write and often am left confused by what the poet is trying to say. So, I cannot offering any technical comments. But I think this is a terrific poem with so few words to say so much. There's no better advice you can give your children. Excellent choice of words!
Good luck in the contest!
Alan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hi,
I am anything but a poet, seldom attempt to write and often am left confused by what the poet is trying to say. So, I cannot offering any technical comments. But I think this is a terrific poem with so few words to say so much. There's no better advice you can give your children. Excellent choice of words!
Good luck in the contest!
Alan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Alan, thank you so much for a wonderful review....I love them...it is harder to write a story from so few words...thank you again...and thank you for the good luck...
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You are welcome!
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smiling at ya...
Comment from Aussie
The Amber Alert was created in Australia when a little boy was stolen, later murdered. The family travels from school to school, teaching the children to never get in a stranger's car. Best wishes for the contest friend.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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The Amber Alert was created in Australia when a little boy was stolen, later murdered. The family travels from school to school, teaching the children to never get in a stranger's car. Best wishes for the contest friend.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hi Kay, thank you so much for sharing this story...it is so sad...but it dangerous for everyone today...I don't care what age you are...thank you for a wonderful review you...
Comment from Ella25
Way to go love.. So exquisitely presented Amber Alert 1-7-1 entry poem. Beautiful work in words, colours and the image. True alert. Best luck in the contest.. you have me on that darling Linda. With love, Ella
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Way to go love.. So exquisitely presented Amber Alert 1-7-1 entry poem. Beautiful work in words, colours and the image. True alert. Best luck in the contest.. you have me on that darling Linda. With love, Ella
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Ella, how are you dong ???I am so glad you like this...thank you for your sooo wonderful review...and alllll your wonderful stars...stars from a star...and for the best of luck...love ya Linda xxoo
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Hi darling, I am doing alright. You are welcome and thank you. You are a star yourself love and an Angel..lots of love, Ella
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HI Ella, I am a bit busy...do Yessssss I am falling behind again...LOL...but I will catch up....love you gorl...so take care...see ya...Linda...xxoo
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Me too, lots of going on in my life at the moment plus the weather is getting better so my dog is more demanding with walks and I love it too. Love you lots darling...Ella
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I was at my daughters in Florida...her coon hound woke me up everyday...LOL...because I walk them every morning...and yes I am farther behind tonight...LOL...love you lots too girl...big hug...xxoo Linda
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Take care darling..my dog sleeps well so when I am ready he is ready. Not before. Love lots....Angel. Ella
Comment from Irish Rain
A very scary, wonderful entry. Run, scream...never be alone! It is a much scarier world for children these days, a shame. Great entry! Blessings...
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A very scary, wonderful entry. Run, scream...never be alone! It is a much scarier world for children these days, a shame. Great entry! Blessings...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Judy, it is a scary world for children today...for everyone....thank you so much for a great review...God Bless...
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My son is 35..it was scary then, but NOTHING like today!
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I know...but it isn't safe for any age any more...so very sad...xxoo
Comment from damommy
I think just about every parent has said this many times.
Good 1-7-1 poem with an important message.
Choice of artwork is good, too. 8-)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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I think just about every parent has said this many times.
Good 1-7-1 poem with an important message.
Choice of artwork is good, too. 8-)
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Yvonne, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...I think every parent has as well...
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I remember when one of my boys was about 10 years old, a lady on the other side of the neighborhood gave him a big bag of candy. He bicycled all the way home for me to inspect it. What I had told him paid off, but the candy was okay. The lady's husband was a sale rep for a candy company. Good to know when you get through to a child, though.
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yes it is...and in todays time...they need to listen...I know so many that don't...I am so glad your boys did...the hit the jack pot...LOL...xxoo love
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-7-1 poem, Amber Alert, all the syllables are put in correctly and you begin and end with RUN. The message is clear as well. Stranger danger.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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This 1-7-1 poem, Amber Alert, all the syllables are put in correctly and you begin and end with RUN. The message is clear as well. Stranger danger.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Bill, that is the message...but not just for children...everyone...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...
