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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Scene at a Horseshoe Pit"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
13 total reviews
Comment from damommy
I think I know these guys. LOL Makes you wonder how two such different people became friends. It happens all the time. That's the joy of life.
I love their banter. Ned's not the sharpest knife in the drawer, but he marches to his own drummer, I think.
Fun to read. Thanks.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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I think I know these guys. LOL Makes you wonder how two such different people became friends. It happens all the time. That's the joy of life.
I love their banter. Ned's not the sharpest knife in the drawer, but he marches to his own drummer, I think.
Fun to read. Thanks.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you, da, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
My only complaint is I wish some of your work was longer as I enjoy it so much! As always a wonderful piece of work which was both entertaining and brilliantly written. I always look forward to reading your work Bill and this is no exception, well done you re so talented! Kindest regards, Meia :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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My only complaint is I wish some of your work was longer as I enjoy it so much! As always a wonderful piece of work which was both entertaining and brilliantly written. I always look forward to reading your work Bill and this is no exception, well done you re so talented! Kindest regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
I have to admit to enjoying this slices of country(?) life. the dialectal nuances work very well with the characters you've developed.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Hi Bill,
I have to admit to enjoying this slices of country(?) life. the dialectal nuances work very well with the characters you've developed.
All the best
G
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you, GM, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from MsPetra
You did a great job with this. I liked the dialect you used throughout. It was spot on.
There isn't anything that I would have done differently.
Please keep writing. I will be looking forward to future offerings from you.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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You did a great job with this. I liked the dialect you used throughout. It was spot on.
There isn't anything that I would have done differently.
Please keep writing. I will be looking forward to future offerings from you.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, MsP, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Do the world a favor and throw that grenade at Ned's ignorant behind. Not to hurt him you understand, but just to scare some sense into him. LOL. This is very entertaining.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Do the world a favor and throw that grenade at Ned's ignorant behind. Not to hurt him you understand, but just to scare some sense into him. LOL. This is very entertaining.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Ha ha - I like their accents - they're
a bit dense mind - made me smile.
I've no experience with scripts, but
followed this easy enough, Bill.
A fore - Afore
Margaret
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Ha ha - I like their accents - they're
a bit dense mind - made me smile.
I've no experience with scripts, but
followed this easy enough, Bill.
A fore - Afore
Margaret
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Margaret, for the kind review. Since it was dialog, and the word wasn't being properly used, I figured the spelling was better utilized to speak to Ned's speech, rather than how the word is typically used. I appreciate your keeping me honest though.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very funny. Exactly what I would expect watching these guys play horse shoes. I wonder how they would do at a tractor pull and which one could pull the tractor the furthest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Very funny. Exactly what I would expect watching these guys play horse shoes. I wonder how they would do at a tractor pull and which one could pull the tractor the furthest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Thomas, for getting into these two. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Like in hand grenades. LOL! I lovvvve the last sentence! ROFLMAO! This is a lot of laughs. Thanks. I needed a good dose of Ned and Pons. Keep 'em coming. :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Like in hand grenades. LOL! I lovvvve the last sentence! ROFLMAO! This is a lot of laughs. Thanks. I needed a good dose of Ned and Pons. Keep 'em coming. :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Phyllis, for liking the boys. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
If nothing else, at it can be said the Ned is resourceful. Because if he has access to live hand grenades that means the the world as we know it will never be safe. If he can get his podunk paws on hand grenades, what else is he possible of getting a hold of?
Why, he might even be able to lay his hands on one of those ISIS suitcase bombs I've been hearing about an awful lot lately.
Scary!
Great stuff as always, Bill.
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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If nothing else, at it can be said the Ned is resourceful. Because if he has access to live hand grenades that means the the world as we know it will never be safe. If he can get his podunk paws on hand grenades, what else is he possible of getting a hold of?
Why, he might even be able to lay his hands on one of those ISIS suitcase bombs I've been hearing about an awful lot lately.
Scary!
Great stuff as always, Bill.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Ned would probably through the pin. Thanks for reviewing this, Dean. Bill
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Hahaha, probably, Bill.
My pleasure,
~Dean
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! These two are dangerous when they get together. Exactly what does a horse do sans shoes? It's got to hurt their tender little peddies. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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LOL! These two are dangerous when they get together. Exactly what does a horse do sans shoes? It's got to hurt their tender little peddies. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Monica, for playing along with the boys. Bill
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My pleasure ... just don't toss the grenade my way LOL.
