Gail the Whale Speaks
Whale's thoughts about humans and whale watching8 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
The POV goes deep inside then psyche and observations of this intelligent Whale(Gail). She is strong in her irritation of humans, but she realizes the pros and cons of her situation. Good irritation of humans, but she realizes the pros and cons of her situation. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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The POV goes deep inside then psyche and observations of this intelligent Whale(Gail). She is strong in her irritation of humans, but she realizes the pros and cons of her situation. Good irritation of humans, but she realizes the pros and cons of her situation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful rating and your words of encouragement.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hey, this was a lot of fun, packaged around genuinely digestible information. I wonder if you guys have the same strict regulations for whale-watching that we have down here in NZ - boats have to keep well away, it's an offence to approach too close, and I see even drone-operators getting into strife for flying their pesky little gadgets near the whales.
That being said, whale-watching is still a profitable pursuit - but it is at least managed so the whales don't get too stressed. I have a poem about a speaking whale in my portfolio. It's called 'Grampus saves the world'. You can find it here, if you want to take a look:
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=437144&userid=450718&tf=0
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Hey, this was a lot of fun, packaged around genuinely digestible information. I wonder if you guys have the same strict regulations for whale-watching that we have down here in NZ - boats have to keep well away, it's an offence to approach too close, and I see even drone-operators getting into strife for flying their pesky little gadgets near the whales.
That being said, whale-watching is still a profitable pursuit - but it is at least managed so the whales don't get too stressed. I have a poem about a speaking whale in my portfolio. It's called 'Grampus saves the world'. You can find it here, if you want to take a look:
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=437144&userid=450718&tf=0
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments. I will take a look at Grampus.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a good piece and you have done your utmost to really get into the mind of the whale. LOL
Lots of information in this well written piece too. All the best,
GMG
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hi there,
This is a good piece and you have done your utmost to really get into the mind of the whale. LOL
Lots of information in this well written piece too. All the best,
GMG
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from c_lucas
Whales used to be hunted for their oil to filled lamps. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Whales used to be hunted for their oil to filled lamps. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A well written story about a female whale and her musings about her life.
I like the warm sense of humor you share with your story, and how you bring the whale's plight to light.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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A well written story about a female whale and her musings about her life.
I like the warm sense of humor you share with your story, and how you bring the whale's plight to light.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank so much for the read and the comment.
Comment from winnona
I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.Your realistic words flowed from beginning to end. Whales were a good choice for this contest and I enjoyed the story. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.Your realistic words flowed from beginning to end. Whales were a good choice for this contest and I enjoyed the story. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read and the rating.
Comment from LaRosa
this is so original and entertaining! I forgot to say, educational too.
"My life isn't always a bed of plankton" great! love it!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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this is so original and entertaining! I forgot to say, educational too.
"My life isn't always a bed of plankton" great! love it!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the wonderful rating and the encouraging words.
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your writing always deserves it. Watching for more, always...
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Thank you so much.
Comment from robyn corum
Harry,
Fascinating information on whales! I enjoyed every tiny bit of it! Thanks for giving it to us in the voice of a whale girl; this was highly entertaining! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Harry,
Fascinating information on whales! I enjoyed every tiny bit of it! Thanks for giving it to us in the voice of a whale girl; this was highly entertaining! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words.
