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World's Worst Nightmare

11th September

2 total reviews 
Comment from schatzling
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I sit here crying as I read your story....non fiction....What a dream....a nightmare to have had and then to have it come true. But there is nothing you could have done. Individuals that knew it was going to happen couldn't....or maybe I should say Didn't do anything to stop it. There have been numerous discussions that the planes could not have caused it....that was just purely done for delivery and how we the people took it into ourselves. The discussions were that the building had dynamite placed strategically as if demolition had intentions because the plane itself could not have done it all alone. I have read everything I could about it...the people that could have prevented it, didn't. The twin tower were brought down like a demolition....the two planes just accentuated everything in order to create chaos. Nothing has ever been the same since. A person was late for work....that lateness saved this person's life. It was something no one will ever forget and the aftermath still continues. I too have premonitions but when I was younger I needed someone to help me; teach me to use it properly and when to use it etc. but instead it too was frowned upon. It didn't grow it was stepped on and deteriorated throughout the years, but I still listen to it when it does show up. I saved my mother's life twice. I didn't go on a plane that saved my life (creepy cause that makes me think of the movie Final Destination). Nevertheless....I enjoyed reading what you have written. It was amazing that you were able to share it with us. The topic...death, disaster...especially if true...is always hard to swallow, but you did an excellent job sharing it with us. AND I feel truly humbled that you selected my work to accompany it.....Everything happens for a reason...we may be bound in some ways with our extra sensitivities. Blessings to you. Live each day as if it were your last. Use that china you been saving for special occasions on a daily basis. Get dressed up just because. ENJOY LIFE for soon life will no longer be.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
    I really thank you for your artwork and appreciate that it was not intimidating to those who may have lost loved ones so I needed something which depicted the theme without being too personal.....I was a little hesitant to share this as it is a sensitive subject and like you researched and researched after that dream...then the event...the dreams of the ex marine and police officer were true too and they made a movie about it which I cried most of the way through....we all have the gift of instict womens intuition in sync and yes many of us lose it...its still within you as you say it does show up...just having a sleep....thank you for sharing your thoughts ..our thoughts ..blessings to you also...yes we should live life to the fullest and appreciate our blessings and gifts...so hope to see more art from you coming up soon and really appreciate your review....take care x
Comment from Onixxiya
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So, was this fiction, or did you actually dream this before it happened?

Regardless, allow me to begin. Your descriptions were vivid and interesting, I was young and didn't really understand the scope of what was going on when it happened, but of course we have all seen it since. When you talk about the floors disappearing, it evokes a very clear image, a perfect, concise description.

The only suggestion I have for change is making sure the punctuation is consistent throughout - one space after a comma and two after a full stop. This distracted me a little, but not from the full force of your tale and the message that you finish on about supporting each other. I am in complete agreement.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
    thanks for taking time to review and appreciate the help with the punctuation..not my strongest points ...yes unfortunately this was true and also true the marine and the police dreaming too of which they made a movie about... ..my worst ever dream besides an earthquake which killed 25,000 people....have been an avid dreamer most of my life...I daydream about world peace......once again thank you kindly for a detailed review :)