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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "haiku suite (goldfish)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
67 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your three nature Haiku poems flow well together. There are well written and stand well alone, as well. My favorite one is your third one. I also like your artwork choice.
angel123
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Your three nature Haiku poems flow well together. There are well written and stand well alone, as well. My favorite one is your third one. I also like your artwork choice.
angel123
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you, angel123, for granting my Haiku their last review before the certificate expired. I am glad you found them to be well-written. Thanks again.
Comment from Ella25
What glitters is not necessarily gold...It is a beautiful, three verse or version of haiku. You are a very talented author, Andre, and you have created an excellent piece. I love the image of golden fish swimming in the water. Outstanding. All the best, Ella
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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What glitters is not necessarily gold...It is a beautiful, three verse or version of haiku. You are a very talented author, Andre, and you have created an excellent piece. I love the image of golden fish swimming in the water. Outstanding. All the best, Ella
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Ella, for granting my haiku suite its last six star review before the certificate expired. Thank you also for your compliments to me as a talented author.
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You are welcome, Andre. So truly deserved. Blessings, Ella
Comment from mermaids
Sunken treasures is a perfect last line. Goldfish certainly are treasures beneath the water. Your haiku form captures the beauty of nature and how she impacts us. pickled autumn is another line that captures the beauty and feel of the maple leaves at the bottom of the pond. Excellent use of descriptive words that creates a clear scene for the reader.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Sunken treasures is a perfect last line. Goldfish certainly are treasures beneath the water. Your haiku form captures the beauty of nature and how she impacts us. pickled autumn is another line that captures the beauty and feel of the maple leaves at the bottom of the pond. Excellent use of descriptive words that creates a clear scene for the reader.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Mermaids, for your review of my "haiku form (that) captures the beauty of nature and how she impacts us."
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Sis Cat, A wonderful haiku suite filled with vivid imagery. I especially liked:
submerged maple leaves
blanket fish pond's bottom
pickled autumn
(Nice)
Great interconnecting verses and good alliteration ... glint/glitter. Terrific artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hello Sis Cat, A wonderful haiku suite filled with vivid imagery. I especially liked:
submerged maple leaves
blanket fish pond's bottom
pickled autumn
(Nice)
Great interconnecting verses and good alliteration ... glint/glitter. Terrific artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you, LateBloomer, for your review of my "wonderful haiku suite." I will keep the blue waters flowing.
Comment from Halfree
I cannot do haiku, I like Faulkner and his long ramblings. Been reading Haiku recently, past month or so and I am starting to understand and enjoy. I think this postings is up there in my best haiku wanderings, do not ask why...cannot tell you. I liked the last verse or whatever, brought back memories from years past.
Enjoyed...and that is good.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I cannot do haiku, I like Faulkner and his long ramblings. Been reading Haiku recently, past month or so and I am starting to understand and enjoy. I think this postings is up there in my best haiku wanderings, do not ask why...cannot tell you. I liked the last verse or whatever, brought back memories from years past.
Enjoyed...and that is good.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I love Faulkner, too, Halfree. Last year or so I went on a Faulkner reading binge. Nevertheless, I enjoy writing haiku and am glad that "this postings is up there in my best haiku wanderings." Thank you for wandering this way.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
What a beautiful story this deserves top marks inspirational 3 tier Haiku, well done I enjoyed reading this so much it was utterly fantastic. well done Kind regards Meia x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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What a beautiful story this deserves top marks inspirational 3 tier Haiku, well done I enjoyed reading this so much it was utterly fantastic. well done Kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for your review. I am glad you found my 3 tier Haiku inspirational and fantastic.
Comment from MsPetra
Wow! This was truly special. I wish I could watch you perform this. I like to perform my poetry too. We are kindred spirits.
There isn't anything I would change.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to future offerings from you.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Wow! This was truly special. I wish I could watch you perform this. I like to perform my poetry too. We are kindred spirits.
There isn't anything I would change.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to future offerings from you.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, MsPetra, for your generous, six star review. More and more reviewers are requesting that I perform my haiku. Thank you for the inspiration.
Comment from Jackarrie
HI
These haikus have wonderful imagery and visualization. they can stand on their own. or in a suite.
nicely crafted, in well chosen words
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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HI
These haikus have wonderful imagery and visualization. they can stand on their own. or in a suite.
nicely crafted, in well chosen words
Mary
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Mary, for your review of my well chosen words.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
A well written haiku suite reminiscing the exploits of a goldfish in a treasure-filled-pond.
The work highlights the maple leaves setting within which the fish thrives; its algae-cum-mosquito toasted nutritional exploits and the seasonal thrust upon which it expresses its colour.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the treasure filled habitat of the goldfish during the winter season.
Outstanding work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A well written haiku suite reminiscing the exploits of a goldfish in a treasure-filled-pond.
The work highlights the maple leaves setting within which the fish thrives; its algae-cum-mosquito toasted nutritional exploits and the seasonal thrust upon which it expresses its colour.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the treasure filled habitat of the goldfish during the winter season.
Outstanding work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Oh, thank you, Lloyd, for your generous, six star review of my haiku suite which "constitutes a significant commentary on the treasure filled habitat of the goldfish during the winter season." I am glad you found these outstanding. I will keep the flag flying.
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Let the flag fly on Sis Cat!
Comment from Luna
This is a lovely collection of haiku. You're right, each one can stand alone or together, I like reading them together. My favorite one was the first one.
I admire this writing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely collection of haiku. You're right, each one can stand alone or together, I like reading them together. My favorite one was the first one.
I admire this writing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Luna, for your review of my lovely collection of haiku. I am glad you admire this writing.
