Act of Endurance
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Comment from suemac
I really enjoyed this poem,picture is great and leads you to understand the poem better. I wondered if 'But them found to be nun' should it read'but then found to be nun' sorry if I have this all wrong.I had to go back and read it a second time it was great.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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I really enjoyed this poem,picture is great and leads you to understand the poem better. I wondered if 'But them found to be nun' should it read'but then found to be nun' sorry if I have this all wrong.I had to go back and read it a second time it was great.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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You're probably right, most of my writes suffers these pits, and I doing revisions upon them. Glad faults did not take away from my intents. Thank you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from rjuselius
wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear tpac! you have worded it close to genius and the presentation is impeccable. i thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
thank you for sharing!
virtual sixer!
blessings!
rebekka x
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear tpac! you have worded it close to genius and the presentation is impeccable. i thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
thank you for sharing!
virtual sixer!
blessings!
rebekka x
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Glad this write excited you, I appreciate your written detailing although I know this write has flaws. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
