Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "The Throne"Dawn of Chaos
32 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message came through due to the use of your analogies. I liked your upbeat ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message came through due to the use of your analogies. I liked your upbeat ending. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Again you seem to be the only one not suffering the flaws in my writes. Thanking you for the accredited rate for intent, given hope welcomed thought.
Comment from royowen
I remember watching The Ten Commandments,starring Charlton Heston. Your poem brought this epic to mind. What a day,meeting the Lord, even His hinder parts. Beautifully written my friend, bless your hand for honouring God, in such an articulate way, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I remember watching The Ten Commandments,starring Charlton Heston. Your poem brought this epic to mind. What a day,meeting the Lord, even His hinder parts. Beautifully written my friend, bless your hand for honouring God, in such an articulate way, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Wow, pleased at your response finding myself encouraged by your statement touch that somehow I finally made contact thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
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Comment from Fred Fitzsimmons
You pose a very powerful message that resonates. Each stanza gives pause for deep thought. The contrasts between the stanzas stand out. And, your photo portrayal matches nicely with the poetry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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You pose a very powerful message that resonates. Each stanza gives pause for deep thought. The contrasts between the stanzas stand out. And, your photo portrayal matches nicely with the poetry. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I do have my pits in my writes finding them a full time job pleased aspects in this work were appealing to your interests thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very deep and artfully presented painting of the highlights of Old Testament's events and peoples that pointed to and led us toward the birth of the King of Kings... An interesting and unique format. :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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A very deep and artfully presented painting of the highlights of Old Testament's events and peoples that pointed to and led us toward the birth of the King of Kings... An interesting and unique format. :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I have my flaws in my writes pleased aspects were captivating to your interests thanking you dispute given flaws for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
This is the kind of poem that I have to read more than once because I get a different take every time I read it.
You certainly have a talent for poetry. I can see you ranking high as an accomplished poet. Good job!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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This is the kind of poem that I have to read more than once because I get a different take every time I read it.
You certainly have a talent for poetry. I can see you ranking high as an accomplished poet. Good job!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Still fighting grammar flaws, pleased aspects in this particular write were captivating to your interests, thanking you dispute for your generous rate and charming consideration.
Comment from Possummagic
I had difficulty working out the praises in your poem but I have given you a 5 because it's well structured and has flow. I'm not very good at philosophical musings so I think the fault lies with me and not your lovely piece of poetry. PM
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I had difficulty working out the praises in your poem but I have given you a 5 because it's well structured and has flow. I'm not very good at philosophical musings so I think the fault lies with me and not your lovely piece of poetry. PM
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I think otherwise, perhaps fifty-fifty, suffering flaws in my writes, rendering revisions hopeful to enhance comprehension of my works. Thanking you for your generous rate dispute given flaws.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
By endurance, and faith in heart, He waits and waits and waits for God, ultimately He came finally this way King of Kings; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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By endurance, and faith in heart, He waits and waits and waits for God, ultimately He came finally this way King of Kings; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I'm giving it my best punch given writes still holding flaws presented revisions hoping to clear thoughts. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Ronni
A rather complex and profound sequence of events, circumstances and consequences in this spiritual poem on 'The Throne'. Ultimately my
take on this is that irregardless, of deeds or ill, God is still the head
of The Throne, and still King Of Kings, His Word centuries ago, cast
down from the Mountaintop. May be close or off, but indeed I admire
your most unusual presentation and sharing. Do write more, so we
can learn more about your style and Spritual voice. Fascinating indeed!
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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A rather complex and profound sequence of events, circumstances and consequences in this spiritual poem on 'The Throne'. Ultimately my
take on this is that irregardless, of deeds or ill, God is still the head
of The Throne, and still King Of Kings, His Word centuries ago, cast
down from the Mountaintop. May be close or off, but indeed I admire
your most unusual presentation and sharing. Do write more, so we
can learn more about your style and Spritual voice. Fascinating indeed!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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Glad this write captured your attention, seen revision illustrating my upgrade hopefully as a writer, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from meeshu
This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, TPAC. your poetry always takes me somewhere, this time deep into a dark forest following a spring stream.............meeshu
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, TPAC. your poetry always takes me somewhere, this time deep into a dark forest following a spring stream.............meeshu
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Yeah, suffering a twisted tongue, straightening pitch a needed fact. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from jmshumate
This was written well, I'm not totally sure how to interpret this but I possibly acscene of Gods judgement on man kind, possibly the flood, or something? Well written though. Thank you for sharing this
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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This was written well, I'm not totally sure how to interpret this but I possibly acscene of Gods judgement on man kind, possibly the flood, or something? Well written though. Thank you for sharing this
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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Interesting thoughts, given reality is a actual painting done by me, stated in poem things seen. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching sentiments.
