Winter Walk
Walking outside on a winter night7 total reviews
Comment from Franklin Price
Very picturesque. I see a full moon on fresh fallen which covers the outside Christmas lights around the house. I can't resist exhaling the sprites of winter. I'm disappointed that it's not snowing where I am right now as I read this. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Very picturesque. I see a full moon on fresh fallen which covers the outside Christmas lights around the house. I can't resist exhaling the sprites of winter. I'm disappointed that it's not snowing where I am right now as I read this. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. We are not having snow either. Just plenty of rain. It is more like spring today, then winter. Have a good weekend.
Comment from mbroyles2
I love the imagery you present here. It's so crisp and clean.
"Ice diamonds sparkle"
And
"Breath sprites dance"
Really great writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I love the imagery you present here. It's so crisp and clean.
"Ice diamonds sparkle"
And
"Breath sprites dance"
Really great writing!
Michael
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the comments and the read.
Comment from marybell1
I loved your Tanka, keeping to the guidelines. It gives a real feeling of winter. Thank goodness I celebrate summer in December. Good luck.
Marybell 1.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I loved your Tanka, keeping to the guidelines. It gives a real feeling of winter. Thank goodness I celebrate summer in December. Good luck.
Marybell 1.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
Excellent handling of this form. The imagery was strong and direct. The personification in the last line was very well done. Strong mood is exhibited in the diction you chose. This is a strong entry. Cowboy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Excellent handling of this form. The imagery was strong and direct. The personification in the last line was very well done. Strong mood is exhibited in the diction you chose. This is a strong entry. Cowboy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much for the read and the comments
Comment from zanya
Yes this Winter Tanka captures the visual and the audible picture of the season of Winter - portraying some of the beauty of the coldest season of the year
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Yes this Winter Tanka captures the visual and the audible picture of the season of Winter - portraying some of the beauty of the coldest season of the year
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent contest entry. You should do well. I don't do well in contests. There are too many talented writers like yourself on this site.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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An excellent contest entry. You should do well. I don't do well in contests. There are too many talented writers like yourself on this site.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read and your kind comment.
Comment from marthastruber
Very nicely done. Can definitely see the images of the Christmas/ Holiday lights under the snow, which always looks really neat. Love your "silver moonlight" and "ice diamonds". Good use of some unique descriptions. Loved reading this. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Very nicely done. Can definitely see the images of the Christmas/ Holiday lights under the snow, which always looks really neat. Love your "silver moonlight" and "ice diamonds". Good use of some unique descriptions. Loved reading this. Keep writing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the read and your kind comments.
