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2017 JAPANESE POETRY

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A collection of Japanese poetry

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
    Thank you very much, my friend.

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reply by Teri7 on 24-Jan-2017
    you are so welcome!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A Haiku poem that actually says something. Very rare. So much Haiku sounds like a Japanese poem that lost something in translation.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
    thank you