Swipe, swipe, swipe-Conclusion
Two Mary's, two debit cards and wedding planning16 total reviews
Comment from damommy
I knew that was what happened. However, I didn't foresee you shredding her card. LOL.
Love the video. Beautiful couple. Husband did a fantastic job.
I've enjoyed this story very much.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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I knew that was what happened. However, I didn't foresee you shredding her card. LOL.
Love the video. Beautiful couple. Husband did a fantastic job.
I've enjoyed this story very much.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Yvonne, so very much. I hope you get your computer problem solved soon :/ Remember the old Remington typewriters...this Fanstory thing would not be happening if not for technology, but sometimes you just want to throttle the little machines! Thank you again for the wonderful RR&R :D
Comment from DR DIP
Hehe You are definitely a professional Victim Mary! lol How the fk did you do that Bruni must think your a loony. Always a great story Mary lol
Hope the wedding went well
dip
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Hehe You are definitely a professional Victim Mary! lol How the fk did you do that Bruni must think your a loony. Always a great story Mary lol
Hope the wedding went well
dip
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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LOL, thanks I think? HAHAHA, yes, I admit trouble finds me easily. But what else would I write about?? I appreciate your RR&R, Dip. The wedding was beautiful (I attached a short video of a few pics to the notes section on the conclusion in case you missed it). I have a lot of catching up to do on reviews and promise to get to yours. December and January are not cooperating for much time on FS... :D
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Hey I fully understand
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You have Presidents to worry about! lol
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Yes we do! Sigh.
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Thank you, Dip.
Comment from Sis Cat
This misadventure is a fun romp and reminds me of what I could have done. There are so many comic twists about your story . . . and slow realizations: (Brunhilda lost it at this point, laughing hysterically between "Only you two" declarations and cerebral slapping while yelling "JAVALENA!")
You prove that fun writing need not be complex. You have an engaging, self deprecatory tone, and I love your alter ego Brunhilda. Finally, you teach us the value of laughing at ourselves. This would make a great Moth Story.
One spag: you spelled "hysterically " incorrectly.
Thank you for sharing and for being the first writing I reviewed after I renewed my membership.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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This misadventure is a fun romp and reminds me of what I could have done. There are so many comic twists about your story . . . and slow realizations: (Brunhilda lost it at this point, laughing hysterically between "Only you two" declarations and cerebral slapping while yelling "JAVALENA!")
You prove that fun writing need not be complex. You have an engaging, self deprecatory tone, and I love your alter ego Brunhilda. Finally, you teach us the value of laughing at ourselves. This would make a great Moth Story.
One spag: you spelled "hysterically " incorrectly.
Thank you for sharing and for being the first writing I reviewed after I renewed my membership.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Hi Andre, can I just say, I love reading your reviews. They are so uplifting and encouraging, so thank you so much for that. My muse left me over the holidays and took Brunhilda too, so it has been a struggle to get back into the FS rigors of writing and reviewing. Your kind words have lifted my commitment to continue. Your assignment of a SIX is truly humbling. Thank you, my friend.
Comment from Heidi M
Great video of wedding highlights. She made a beautiful bride.
wedding (wouldn't) require
tulle
laughing hysteri(c)ally
I'd say Kayla is one of those 'keepers' as far as friends go. Glad you got the mess straightened out!
Happy baby shopping...maybe you need to compare the images on your cards before you shop.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Great video of wedding highlights. She made a beautiful bride.
wedding (wouldn't) require
tulle
laughing hysteri(c)ally
I'd say Kayla is one of those 'keepers' as far as friends go. Glad you got the mess straightened out!
Happy baby shopping...maybe you need to compare the images on your cards before you shop.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Aw, thank you Heidi. Now can you believe I read this aloud to myself this time hoping to pick up errors. Obviously, that little editing advice has not helped with catching my own errors, so thank you once again for the embarrassing (me) catches! Kayla is one of eight girls in her family, and I've known her all but five years of my entire life. She is a keeper in the highest regard :D
Thank you for the wonderful review, and well wishes. I won't be going to oversized Baby-Q invitations! Learned my lesson the hard way! :D
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
All's well that ends well, and the wedding party is gorgeous, bride especially in that form-fitting gown. The arbor-ladder thing turned out great, too. :)
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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All's well that ends well, and the wedding party is gorgeous, bride especially in that form-fitting gown. The arbor-ladder thing turned out great, too. :)
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Phyllis :D I appreciate your RR&R. I have a lot of catching up to do on reviews and promise to get to yours. December and January are not cooperating for much time on FS... :D
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow Bruni had it right. Only you could do this and try to warn us and still have it turn out okay and on to the next adventure. I love your sense of humor
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Wow Bruni had it right. Only you could do this and try to warn us and still have it turn out okay and on to the next adventure. I love your sense of humor
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Barb :D I appreciate your RR&R. I have a lot of catching up to do on reviews and promise to get to yours. December and January are not cooperating for much time on FS... :D
