therapist
a 3 5 34 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your poem is profoundly written with just a few words. I like your subject and your message. I also like your artwork choice.
angel123
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Your poem is profoundly written with just a few words. I like your subject and your message. I also like your artwork choice.
angel123
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review and sparkling 6 stars to light my way. I thought the flower lit from within was a perfect illustration of the benefits of therapy. Cheers, j
Comment from Sixty70
Wonderful. As a former therapist and client of therapy, I appreciate the underlying message. Maybe the most significant relationship in a person's life, at least for a short time, but with limits placed on it. It's temporary and once a week. Your poem expresses that boundary well.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Wonderful. As a former therapist and client of therapy, I appreciate the underlying message. Maybe the most significant relationship in a person's life, at least for a short time, but with limits placed on it. It's temporary and once a week. Your poem expresses that boundary well.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the insightful review. I thought the flower, lit from within, was perfect art to express my thoughts. Nice to sit down with someone ,non biased, to find clarity week by week. Cheers, j
Comment from rspoet
That gorgeous picture is therapeutic for anyone.
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 contest with exact syllables.
Many can relate to these words.
One suggestion on grammar:
Perhaps a colon or em dash after "therapy"
and then a lower case on "my."
Very solid entry
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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That gorgeous picture is therapeutic for anyone.
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 contest with exact syllables.
Many can relate to these words.
One suggestion on grammar:
Perhaps a colon or em dash after "therapy"
and then a lower case on "my."
Very solid entry
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review and advice, much better. I figure that little flower blooming from within is how someone would feel after a session with a therapist. Just saying. Cheers, j
Comment from nancyrabbrose
A lovely poem. No matter that I wonder how the thoughts get clarified, therapy of all sorts does help to clarify. Good for you. Perhaps the blowing away of the chaff of the weed is an illustration of mindless thoughts blowing away and leaving clarity. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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A lovely poem. No matter that I wonder how the thoughts get clarified, therapy of all sorts does help to clarify. Good for you. Perhaps the blowing away of the chaff of the weed is an illustration of mindless thoughts blowing away and leaving clarity. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review. I figured that flower lit from within is how a person would feel after a session. I do know some people who have jumbled thoughts. I like to lay plans and thoughts out methodically, usually making a list.It is easy to get overwhelmed in life without clarity of thought. Cheers, j
