Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Chapter Four part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Looks lie a great beginning for your novel. It is interesting and you take the reader into each scene with you. I will watch for more of your work. Great job.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Excellent. Looks lie a great beginning for your novel. It is interesting and you take the reader into each scene with you. I will watch for more of your work. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to your story. So who is the mysterious owner and what is the underlying story to all this. Well I do have a good guess, but I let the story flow along. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to your story. So who is the mysterious owner and what is the underlying story to all this. Well I do have a good guess, but I let the story flow along. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend I was just getting in to the reading as the tension was building up and it finished again a very enjoyable chapter I look forward to the next well done my friend regards Jill
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Hello my friend I was just getting in to the reading as the tension was building up and it finished again a very enjoyable chapter I look forward to the next well done my friend regards Jill
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A good addition to your story. More questions are raised than answered. What is he trying to place on the picture, a tracking device?
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A good addition to your story. More questions are raised than answered. What is he trying to place on the picture, a tracking device?
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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I am just not sure. LOL Thank you for the kind review,
