Perennials of War
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
a well presented chapter, Barbara - most intriguing --
I'm not familiar with the story, but I found it easy to
follow and a most enjoyable read.
Anderson checks up on Ivan Kuznetsov - I'm interested to hear
what he finds out.
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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a well presented chapter, Barbara - most intriguing --
I'm not familiar with the story, but I found it easy to
follow and a most enjoyable read.
Anderson checks up on Ivan Kuznetsov - I'm interested to hear
what he finds out.
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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I am interested in hearing what he learns too. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An intriguing write making me wonder what's going to happen next? Paintings are fascinating subjects for stories and you captures my attention, love Dolly x
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An intriguing write making me wonder what's going to happen next? Paintings are fascinating subjects for stories and you captures my attention, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Excellent pace and flow. You moved the story forward with a minimum of dialogue. Kudos!
Belvedere Museum funny I live in a small town named Belvidere.
Liked the teaser at the end of the break regarding Shana and near the end of the post.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
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Good morning, Barbara
Excellent pace and flow. You moved the story forward with a minimum of dialogue. Kudos!
Belvedere Museum funny I live in a small town named Belvidere.
Liked the teaser at the end of the break regarding Shana and near the end of the post.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from giraffmang
Nice little bit of detective work and intrigue in this instalment. More questions for us all...
"Austria considers 'The Kiss' a national treasure'.- there appears to be an extra quote mark after treasure here.
He moved close enough to the painting to check the owners name - owner's.
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Nice little bit of detective work and intrigue in this instalment. More questions for us all...
"Austria considers 'The Kiss' a national treasure'.- there appears to be an extra quote mark after treasure here.
He moved close enough to the painting to check the owners name - owner's.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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I am struggling with your first suggestion because 'The Kiss' is written the way I just wrote it, but it's also the ending of dialogue. I wasn't sure how to indicate it. I am still confused. More research!!! I did make the second correction, that was just a brain fart. Thank you.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is an ambitious and amazing piece of work.It is exciting, fascinating,unusual, quirky and superb!. This is an excellent vehicle for a series or show and would be fantastic to watch.Very well deserved five stars.well done kind regards Meia x
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This is an ambitious and amazing piece of work.It is exciting, fascinating,unusual, quirky and superb!. This is an excellent vehicle for a series or show and would be fantastic to watch.Very well deserved five stars.well done kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from bookishfabler
I grew up in New York and the Met was one of my favorite places. Back then it was a small donation to visit and you could literally spend all day lost in the art.
Boy the security guard knows a lot about the artwork. Give him a raise.
Great but short.
Hugs Heidi
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I grew up in New York and the Met was one of my favorite places. Back then it was a small donation to visit and you could literally spend all day lost in the art.
Boy the security guard knows a lot about the artwork. Give him a raise.
Great but short.
Hugs Heidi
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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My husband and I were at the Getty in LA and were shocked at how much the guards knew. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is getting more and more intriguing, Barbara. What on earth was he hoping to find on the painting, and what about the car that was following Anderson, I can't imagine he didn't know it was there. As he said, more questions and still no answers, except he now knows who 'owns' the painting. Excellent, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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This is getting more and more intriguing, Barbara. What on earth was he hoping to find on the painting, and what about the car that was following Anderson, I can't imagine he didn't know it was there. As he said, more questions and still no answers, except he now knows who 'owns' the painting. Excellent, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazorFace
The chapter looks solid. I did not notice any grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. I know this is just a small slither of a larger story. Good luck with that. I will be looking for the next slither :).
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The chapter looks solid. I did not notice any grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. I know this is just a small slither of a larger story. Good luck with that. I will be looking for the next slither :).
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
More questions and clues. What does 'Ivan' want attached to the painting? Good job creating mystery. I thought your writing was descriptive and you let us inside Anderson's head as he searches for answers.
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More questions and clues. What does 'Ivan' want attached to the painting? Good job creating mystery. I thought your writing was descriptive and you let us inside Anderson's head as he searches for answers.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Is that picture SHana's? She could just call the authorities, couldn't she? How else will she get it back? She has proof of ownership, which should be enough. I don't see the problem.
I like 'the kiss'... weird but stunning!
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Is that picture SHana's? She could just call the authorities, couldn't she? How else will she get it back? She has proof of ownership, which should be enough. I don't see the problem.
I like 'the kiss'... weird but stunning!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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There is a lot more that goes into these stolen paintings. I have researched it and it has taken some people 20-30 years to get their paintings back after they've proved it belonged to them. Thank you for the kind review.
