Wise Owl
This is humor for the birds.18 total reviews
Comment from Susanjohn
Those dang birdbrains!!!!!! Well, how witty and clever is this!!!!!! great job on this little poem of yours...i sure enjoyed it!!!! :-)))
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Those dang birdbrains!!!!!! Well, how witty and clever is this!!!!!! great job on this little poem of yours...i sure enjoyed it!!!! :-)))
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you, your enthusiasm made my day!
Comment from estory
you satisfied the requirement here, and I think you had a great second line. the first line I didn't like. you can come up with something better than that. it sounds too childish. the last line was close but didn't work for me either. the second line is a nice natural sounding, conversational line that appears fresh in this form, and that's hard to do. it could use an image in line three to stand out, resonate. the first line too. say it with an image. connect it with our experience estory
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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you satisfied the requirement here, and I think you had a great second line. the first line I didn't like. you can come up with something better than that. it sounds too childish. the last line was close but didn't work for me either. the second line is a nice natural sounding, conversational line that appears fresh in this form, and that's hard to do. it could use an image in line three to stand out, resonate. the first line too. say it with an image. connect it with our experience estory
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your suggestions and I appreciate your evaluation.
Comment from Bill Schott
The 5-7-5 poem about birds, Wise Owl, seems to be putting a dent in the reputation of that feathered forest mentor that knows the number of licks to the center of a Tootsie pop.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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The 5-7-5 poem about birds, Wise Owl, seems to be putting a dent in the reputation of that feathered forest mentor that knows the number of licks to the center of a Tootsie pop.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
Thanks for the good humor.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short poem. The wise owl become wise because of all the questions asked. If we don't ask questions we will never know the answers.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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A very well-written short poem. The wise owl become wise because of all the questions asked. If we don't ask questions we will never know the answers.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your good observations.
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry, I think you have completed the contest challenge well. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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a well-written contest entry, I think you have completed the contest challenge well. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging remarks.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I like this it did make me smile you can picture that owl with his glasses on his beak looking wise I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Yes I like this it did make me smile you can picture that owl with his glasses on his beak looking wise I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Cute. Good luck contest I just viewed. I love way describe wise owl as birdbrain. This owl is very smart and eve smarter than normal bird. Love word used describe sound owl makes.liberty justice.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Cute. Good luck contest I just viewed. I love way describe wise owl as birdbrain. This owl is very smart and eve smarter than normal bird. Love word used describe sound owl makes.liberty justice.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review.
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Correction: even
Comment from BeasPeas
Ha, ha. Very cute and clever. I like it. He's always asking questions, but does he get any answers? Third line is a good wrap up for your 5-7-5. Second line is my favorite. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Ha, ha. Very cute and clever. I like it. He's always asking questions, but does he get any answers? Third line is a good wrap up for your 5-7-5. Second line is my favorite. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for such a supportive review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Yes, but we never learn unless we ask, so maybe he's not so dumb after all. I always said that a person can learn everything if he knows what to ask.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Yes, but we never learn unless we ask, so maybe he's not so dumb after all. I always said that a person can learn everything if he knows what to ask.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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I agree including the owl.
Comment from Irish Rain
Well I just love this!!! Needed a touch of humor tonight!! 'Such a birdbrain'...so cute! I don't see how anything can top this!!! Good luck, Sunday blessings to you!!!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Well I just love this!!! Needed a touch of humor tonight!! 'Such a birdbrain'...so cute! I don't see how anything can top this!!! Good luck, Sunday blessings to you!!!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for seeing the humor in this poem and for your positive review.
