A Beauty
Who gets the last laugh...4 total reviews
Comment from Linda Kay
I enjoyed the comparison here, and think I know some people who could benefit from learning the moral if this poem - showier is not always the best impression to make.
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I enjoyed the comparison here, and think I know some people who could benefit from learning the moral if this poem - showier is not always the best impression to make.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed 5-7-5 and I agree with that she is a beauty in her own right. The first two lines make a statement and the last line wraps it up. Good job. Marilyn
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Very nicely composed 5-7-5 and I agree with that she is a beauty in her own right. The first two lines make a statement and the last line wraps it up. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Poetic Candice
I thought that this was good for the type of short poem asked. The use of syllables were very well expressed and I liked the touch of wit penned at the end of the piece.
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I thought that this was good for the type of short poem asked. The use of syllables were very well expressed and I liked the touch of wit penned at the end of the piece.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Richard J
June,
This is an absolutely stunning piece, and I've learned something about peafowls, too.
Your presentation is sheer wonderment, colors to enthrall, gorgeous picture, and syntax to be adored by the most discerning of poets ... I love it!
Note: As a 5-7-5 poem, L3 iss 7-syllables.
Good luck in the contest, and a big hug of thanks for the treat! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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June,
This is an absolutely stunning piece, and I've learned something about peafowls, too.
Your presentation is sheer wonderment, colors to enthrall, gorgeous picture, and syntax to be adored by the most discerning of poets ... I love it!
Note: As a 5-7-5 poem, L3 iss 7-syllables.
Good luck in the contest, and a big hug of thanks for the treat! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review!
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I was my pleasure, June ... thanks for the treat! : )
