Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That is a weather forecast for a tropical storm into hurricane alright. You are definitely knowledgable on the subject. I was raised in South Florida the season is June to October there. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed week.

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Very nicely written poem for this challenge. It takes a little bit of a welcomed challenge to pick up on the category, until the last paragraph :) Feelings were expressed very well! Good luck, AmyJo

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed week.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, The Rain of Sixes, makes sense as I read the theme of hurricanes. You have used all the required words and created an interesting work.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I guess we all wish we had more sixes to share with those worthy of them, but then the six would become the new five. Like the hurricane we are safe within the eye--can see the sky, can see the bigger picture. Don't get caught up in the storm. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

This is great!!! Wish I had one of these 'strong hurricane sixes' to give you!!! A most original poem!!! Gotta be the winner in this contest, good luck, and blessings...

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely week.

Comment from robyn corum

Good

Dear Mystery Writer,

I feel like a fool. Or like I'm trying to read a foreign language maybe. This just didn't make sense to me. --frowny face-- I'm sorry but I read it several times and just didn't understand. Can you help me out?

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

I didn't know that. Or if I did, I had forgotten. There are so many degrees of storms, one has a hard time keeping up. Not sure what you meant when you said, I wish I could share more f them with you. I presume you meant sharing the stories of them.
Good job!
Drew

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about sixes raining day. We all do our best to earn a few of those precious sixes. Sometimes we miss it when all the sixes are gone.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely week.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, nicely done on the free verse and using the allotted words, has a good meter and reads well. good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.