All This And Heaven Too?
A satiric comedy about Heaven39 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading your satirical poem. Rhyming and content are very good. Clear for the reader and topic is always timely. My take on it is this--we are living in a 3-D world to learn from all it has to offer. As long as we're not harming anybody else, enjoy each day we're given and all the good things that come our way. Amen! Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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I enjoyed reading your satirical poem. Rhyming and content are very good. Clear for the reader and topic is always timely. My take on it is this--we are living in a 3-D world to learn from all it has to offer. As long as we're not harming anybody else, enjoy each day we're given and all the good things that come our way. Amen! Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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You are one of my strongest supporters and I greatly appreciate it -thank you
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My pleasure, Jay.
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...How I wish I had a six for this!! Love it!! I personally am in LOVE with the world, I love my stuff, traveling, people, cities, country, Christmas, Easter, Summer nights...you get the drift. Heaven would have to be pretty darn awesome, because I can't think of anything more boring than to sing in a choir of angels for eternity, ha ha. Loved this!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Ha ha...How I wish I had a six for this!! Love it!! I personally am in LOVE with the world, I love my stuff, traveling, people, cities, country, Christmas, Easter, Summer nights...you get the drift. Heaven would have to be pretty darn awesome, because I can't think of anything more boring than to sing in a choir of angels for eternity, ha ha. Loved this!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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I love your pen nameI thank you for your many c omments.My 91 year old eyes sort of restricts my commenting
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I chose it because our history goes back to Ireland/Scotland....but also because I love the rain!!! Have a good day1
Comment from Teri7
I was so glad you are joking! This is very well written with very good descriptive wording. The other thing truly is that God is real and so is His love for us! Great job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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I was so glad you are joking! This is very well written with very good descriptive wording. The other thing truly is that God is real and so is His love for us! Great job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Very much appreciated -thank you
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is a refreshing and interesting take of faith. This is outstanding and fascinating as I also have these very thoughts about God, but hope in the end it will all work out, an excellent piece of work, well done. Meia.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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This is a refreshing and interesting take of faith. This is outstanding and fascinating as I also have these very thoughts about God, but hope in the end it will all work out, an excellent piece of work, well done. Meia.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you friend-I greatly appreciated your comment
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem. God allow us to have all these little pleasures on earth to see if we still make time for Him too. Sadly most of us fail the test.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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A very well-written humorous poem. God allow us to have all these little pleasures on earth to see if we still make time for Him too. Sadly most of us fail the test.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Your continued support of my poems is inspiring and greatly ap preciated
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Hey, I agree with you. If I have to give up my cats and coffee then I don't want to go to heaven. I have to believe my cats have a place in heaven too.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Excellent. Hey, I agree with you. If I have to give up my cats and coffee then I don't want to go to heaven. I have to believe my cats have a place in heaven too.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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I appreciate your encouraging comment-thank you
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
I think God does (wink).
Always look forward to the shiny gems of truth wrapped in their homespun packages.
Good rhymes and rhythm as always, jbird.
GoodHearted Woman
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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I think God does (wink).
Always look forward to the shiny gems of truth wrapped in their homespun packages.
Good rhymes and rhythm as always, jbird.
GoodHearted Woman
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you Good Heart-hope you are doing well
Comment from heyjude
Jay, I'm glad.to read your notes and know this is just stress relief. I'm sure there are a lot who don't want to give up sin even for heaven
Hope you're having a great day
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Jay, I'm glad.to read your notes and know this is just stress relief. I'm sure there are a lot who don't want to give up sin even for heaven
Hope you're having a great day
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for continuing support of my offerings
Comment from loismddavis
What a perfect clever , funny poem. The rhyme scheme flowed nicely with no forcing and I enjoyed reading it immensely-just one little slip with a typo in the last line. really good job
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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What a perfect clever , funny poem. The rhyme scheme flowed nicely with no forcing and I enjoyed reading it immensely-just one little slip with a typo in the last line. really good job
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your very encouraging comment-was appreciated
