All This And Heaven Too?
A satiric comedy about Heaven39 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Absolutely! I'm a firm believer God has a sense of humor and knows our hearts too. Sometimes, we do just need to laugh. Great job with this creative poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Absolutely! I'm a firm believer God has a sense of humor and knows our hearts too. Sometimes, we do just need to laugh. Great job with this creative poem.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comment
Comment from Thal1959
Very enjoyable and charming. Reads very smoothly, Jaybird1. Not to cast you in a dark role, but in my last book Winter Solstice," the devil uses a similar argument to ensnare a retired military officer. (This is set in the 19th century.) The devil explains at length how clean, sterile and antiseptic things are in heaven - what would a man like the major do in heaven having no battles to fight, no glories to win, and no maidens to seduce. I think we all wonder if we will really fit into heaven.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Very enjoyable and charming. Reads very smoothly, Jaybird1. Not to cast you in a dark role, but in my last book Winter Solstice," the devil uses a similar argument to ensnare a retired military officer. (This is set in the 19th century.) The devil explains at length how clean, sterile and antiseptic things are in heaven - what would a man like the major do in heaven having no battles to fight, no glories to win, and no maidens to seduce. I think we all wonder if we will really fit into heaven.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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A very perceptive comment. I enjoyed a d appreciated it
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You're welcome - I enjoyed it.
Comment from William Ross
Hahaha, all in good fun, Not sure any of that stuff is needed on the other side in either place lol. Good rhyme and meter, Thanks for the share and have a good day
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Hahaha, all in good fun, Not sure any of that stuff is needed on the other side in either place lol. Good rhyme and meter, Thanks for the share and have a good day
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you Bill and a good day or you
Comment from jusylee72
Honest and fun poem with thoughts I have had myself. Maybe not labeling those things as sin would help. You have some spunk and I can feel it in you humor. Thank you.
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Honest and fun poem with thoughts I have had myself. Maybe not labeling those things as sin would help. You have some spunk and I can feel it in you humor. Thank you.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you for this very enjoyable comment
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello jaybird1, Thank you for lightening the air. I'm breathing better already. I especially liked:
And how about the luxury
of materialistic things?
Our cars, our pets, our boats and such,
O! The comfort that each brings.
j1, I'm sure that God knows you are kidding and through His kingdom gates, the best is yet to come, but until then, enjoy life 'cause it was meant for living.
Very good, very cute, a pleasure to read.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Smiles, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Hello jaybird1, Thank you for lightening the air. I'm breathing better already. I especially liked:
And how about the luxury
of materialistic things?
Our cars, our pets, our boats and such,
O! The comfort that each brings.
j1, I'm sure that God knows you are kidding and through His kingdom gates, the best is yet to come, but until then, enjoy life 'cause it was meant for living.
Very good, very cute, a pleasure to read.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Smiles, LateBloomer
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your interesting comment.It was enjoyable and encouraging
Comment from Chrissy710
Ha Ha Jaybird love it and yes it is a lighthearted post and a good one too. it skipped along and made me smile. Thanks for sharing your wonderful humour Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Ha Ha Jaybird love it and yes it is a lighthearted post and a good one too. it skipped along and made me smile. Thanks for sharing your wonderful humour Cheers Christine
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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I appreciate your encouraging co mments-thank you
Comment from frierajac
This makes me smile. It seems very wise, as this is just the kind of thing I hear from people I know, and must be a reflection of the public mind itself. It makes us see, this ditty, that the individual is not in a tragic situation. I wouldn't change a word
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This makes me smile. It seems very wise, as this is just the kind of thing I hear from people I know, and must be a reflection of the public mind itself. It makes us see, this ditty, that the individual is not in a tragic situation. I wouldn't change a word
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you for yobur inspiring comment and that great rating.Was deeply app reciated
Comment from AnnaLinda
Jay,
Yes, I guess God knows you're joking...I
on the other hand...am wondering?
LOL
Nice poem with good flow, humor?
and rhymes. Gets one thinking...
Linda
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Jay,
Yes, I guess God knows you're joking...I
on the other hand...am wondering?
LOL
Nice poem with good flow, humor?
and rhymes. Gets one thinking...
Linda
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sweet?AnnaLinda-was enjoyed and appreciated
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Ha! Loved it!
You did a great job on the humour in this write, Jaybird1. Excellent rhyme and flow to this creative write. Your poem made me smile and it made me chuckle ... sixth star for that! I'm thinking anyone who can make people laugh has just got to be in God's good books. No worries! :)
Connie
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Ha! Loved it!
You did a great job on the humour in this write, Jaybird1. Excellent rhyme and flow to this creative write. Your poem made me smile and it made me chuckle ... sixth star for that! I'm thinking anyone who can make people laugh has just got to be in God's good books. No worries! :)
Connie
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Agreat and enjoyable comment with 6 star rating. Who could ask for anything more? Thank you
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You're welcome! My pleasure!
Comment from lyenochka
Well, praise God for He knows our hearts and I'm sure He has a wonderful sense of humor! Enjoyed your light verse. Ah, if really people would have "no one left to berate!"
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Well, praise God for He knows our hearts and I'm sure He has a wonderful sense of humor! Enjoyed your light verse. Ah, if really people would have "no one left to berate!"
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments
