All This And Heaven Too?
A satiric comedy about Heaven39 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, All This and Heaven Too?, presents that most talked about aspect of Heaven, losing all the things you have here. I find it tough to be nice for a day at a time; an eternity seems like a stretch.
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This poem, All This and Heaven Too?, presents that most talked about aspect of Heaven, losing all the things you have here. I find it tough to be nice for a day at a time; an eternity seems like a stretch.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
Comment from Neonewman
What a great way to deliver this wonderfully crafted message my friend. I enjoyed the flow, the message and the humor. May God always bless you.
Steve
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What a great way to deliver this wonderfully crafted message my friend. I enjoyed the flow, the message and the humor. May God always bless you.
Steve
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a Faith Poetry Contest entry. Its very good you outline reasons for embracing worldly ways and for continuing on a virtuous path. I dont think you have to give up sex to enter the kingdom heaven, at least I hope.
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This should have been a Faith Poetry Contest entry. Its very good you outline reasons for embracing worldly ways and for continuing on a virtuous path. I dont think you have to give up sex to enter the kingdom heaven, at least I hope.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
Comment from susand3022
You know, it's a very fine commentary on today's society. Whether you're one of those who are playing 'keep up with the Jones' or if you're Amish these days. It seems that a lot of people set rules for themselves to live by then intentionally break them. Then everyone asks forgiveness after the sins they know they are going to commit like it's okay they did these things as long as they ask for forgiveness afterward. Like a way to beat the system. Very well done.
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You know, it's a very fine commentary on today's society. Whether you're one of those who are playing 'keep up with the Jones' or if you're Amish these days. It seems that a lot of people set rules for themselves to live by then intentionally break them. Then everyone asks forgiveness after the sins they know they are going to commit like it's okay they did these things as long as they ask for forgiveness afterward. Like a way to beat the system. Very well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
Comment from Insider98
It's a very good thing for us to do something light-hearted from time to time. I think that many people have thought about that, which is natural, but in the end, I believe what's in heaven will be infinite times more precious. Great job!
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It's a very good thing for us to do something light-hearted from time to time. I think that many people have thought about that, which is natural, but in the end, I believe what's in heaven will be infinite times more precious. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
Comment from meeshu
this is great, Jaybird. I think God probably has time in his day for a little fun. it really a great cadence and 'beat'. good rhythm and flow..............meeshu
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this is great, Jaybird. I think God probably has time in his day for a little fun. it really a great cadence and 'beat'. good rhythm and flow..............meeshu
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JAYBIRD1: Your posting here brings to my mind this true Biblical saying: "There is a way which seems right unto a person, but the end thereof are the ways of death and destruction." PROVERBS 14:12. You have the correct state of thinking, Jaybird. In spite of all negative things in your life...keep on trying to do the right things. Yes. Our God's eyes ponder your heart. And He knows the truth about you. He knows when you are joking...and He knows when you are not joking. God bless you, Jaybird1. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO JAYBIRD1: Your posting here brings to my mind this true Biblical saying: "There is a way which seems right unto a person, but the end thereof are the ways of death and destruction." PROVERBS 14:12. You have the correct state of thinking, Jaybird. In spite of all negative things in your life...keep on trying to do the right things. Yes. Our God's eyes ponder your heart. And He knows the truth about you. He knows when you are joking...and He knows when you are not joking. God bless you, Jaybird1. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
Comment from jenintorre
Ha ha. I like this a lot. It really made me smile, such a nice change from all the doom and gloom poems. I don't think you really need to make the decision about whether you want to go to heaven or not as I don't think you get much choice. Nice one. Cheers. Jen.
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Ha ha. I like this a lot. It really made me smile, such a nice change from all the doom and gloom poems. I don't think you really need to make the decision about whether you want to go to heaven or not as I don't think you get much choice. Nice one. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
Comment from robyn corum
hahahahahahaha!
I totally get it. I hope everyone will see the bulge in your cheek where your tongue is so firmly planted - but I'm afraid you may still hear some flak. Oh, well. *smile* I got a laugh. Thanks!
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hahahahahahaha!
I totally get it. I hope everyone will see the bulge in your cheek where your tongue is so firmly planted - but I'm afraid you may still hear some flak. Oh, well. *smile* I got a laugh. Thanks!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
But Jaybird 1 aren't you too old to be gambling and what not?
Ok I'm joking. I'm looking forward to being your age aren't you 93? If I have my wits about me like you do.
I sure hope God knows you're joking. He made the platypus and put men and women together so I know He has a sense of humor
God bless
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But Jaybird 1 aren't you too old to be gambling and what not?
Ok I'm joking. I'm looking forward to being your age aren't you 93? If I have my wits about me like you do.
I sure hope God knows you're joking. He made the platypus and put men and women together so I know He has a sense of humor
God bless
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
