Perennials of War
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Comment from judiverse
Shana makes an unassuming house guest. She makes no demands. Anderson plans to see what he can find out about the painting and if they know of information the Russians who've been hounding Shana for. Romeo is doing his best to guard Shana, although she doesn't appreciate it. Interesting details about the Jewish religious practices. Anderson is really a prince if he decides that Shana might be needing more clothes, as she's staying longer than she had planned. Shana's determined to make do with the clothes she has. She is a very self-sufficient person. judi
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Shana makes an unassuming house guest. She makes no demands. Anderson plans to see what he can find out about the painting and if they know of information the Russians who've been hounding Shana for. Romeo is doing his best to guard Shana, although she doesn't appreciate it. Interesting details about the Jewish religious practices. Anderson is really a prince if he decides that Shana might be needing more clothes, as she's staying longer than she had planned. Shana's determined to make do with the clothes she has. She is a very self-sufficient person. judi
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I don't think Shana is impressed with all of Anderson's money. I think we'll find out it takes more to impress her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mbroyles2
This is by far one of my favorites stories posted on this site. I enjoy the way Anderson and his household halve taken an interstate in Shana.
They are extremely helpful.
Wonderful character development.
Michael
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This is by far one of my favorites stories posted on this site. I enjoy the way Anderson and his household halve taken an interstate in Shana.
They are extremely helpful.
Wonderful character development.
Michael
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from royowen
Not only food but very sentient dogs, smarter than people, but much nicer! but then my wife thinks of them that way too, and our last dog (buddy) was a very noble dog, could not separate him from my young granddaughter, I think all children should be raised with a doggy pal. Great story, Drew is trying to find out who owns a painting at the museum, well done, blessings, Riy
Typo : you didn't need to (wait) breakfast for me. Make?
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Not only food but very sentient dogs, smarter than people, but much nicer! but then my wife thinks of them that way too, and our last dog (buddy) was a very noble dog, could not separate him from my young granddaughter, I think all children should be raised with a doggy pal. Great story, Drew is trying to find out who owns a painting at the museum, well done, blessings, Riy
Typo : you didn't need to (wait) breakfast for me. Make?
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I agree. All children need to grow up with at least one dog. Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome Barbara
Comment from loismddavis
I did not see any romance but there were possibilities there--it is difficult to critique a story art way through but I did see some information that that there is some possible intrigue here (who are those three Russians) and though I did not quite understand the domestic scene in the Kitchen the dialog about Jewish customs was interesting. I would like to read more of this story about a billionaire even though they seem to be a dime a dozen these days
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I did not see any romance but there were possibilities there--it is difficult to critique a story art way through but I did see some information that that there is some possible intrigue here (who are those three Russians) and though I did not quite understand the domestic scene in the Kitchen the dialog about Jewish customs was interesting. I would like to read more of this story about a billionaire even though they seem to be a dime a dozen these days
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This is unique billionaire and I always build up my romance very slow surrounded by a real story. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I haven't read any of this particular story. What I read here is interesting and looks like something I might enjoy reading to the end. It is nicely done.
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Excellent. I haven't read any of this particular story. What I read here is interesting and looks like something I might enjoy reading to the end. It is nicely done.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks as if Drew is prepared to get some answers. This is very well written with very good dialogue. There is very good imagery. So far. so good.
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It looks as if Drew is prepared to get some answers. This is very well written with very good dialogue. There is very good imagery. So far. so good.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
