Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What an adorable creature. I wouldn't mind having Molly hanging around. You make her sound like a good companion. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thank you. She is a great companion. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.Fifty words is a challenge to write a story in. Good luck in the contest. Well done.

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thank you for your comments Winnona. I appreciate your review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty word story, Best Friend, is cute character sketch of a cool pup. A plot is nowhere in sight though. Maybe if you hinted to a deed performed by Molly we could invent a story in our heads. Short is hard.

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thank you Bill. Yes 50 words is hard to do. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Do darling. We have two greeters and I enjoy the look on my husbands face when they run to him. He feels so loved and cared for. So happy you have a greeter in your life. Good description in only fifty words.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thank you. I', glad I have this little greeter too. Glad you have the same experiences times two.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a well written little piece. Is it a story though? That would be my only concern in regard to the actual competition.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

In hindsight, that's a good question. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from RodG

Good

I can see why you would write about Molly. She seems to be the perfect "greeter" with her affectionate kisses and wagging tail and even disposition. What more can one ask for from a "friend"?

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thank you for your comments and for reading my story.

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

What a great model for how to write a story in so few words. There's sufficient description and suggestion of emotion that the reader comes away with a sense of completion. Good luck in your contest

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017

Thanks you so much for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.