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Clouds of arrows, floods of gore

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Comment from kiwisteveh
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Solid rhyming quatrains.

Yes, the gods most people follow tend to be a warlike lot. I'm sure most churchgoers blithely recite scripture about the Lord of Hosts without even questioning its literal meaning.

Does it hold true today that religion is to some degree responsible for most of the misery on the earth?

Steve

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
    Mark Twain's War Prayer impressed me, way back when...thanks very much for reading and reviewing.