Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Life cycles... what to do?!!! You're hilarious. Well thought out and humorously written. Wonderful work. Creative. Sensible and fun. You definitely mastered the poetic style. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks. So glad you had fun with my little poem.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and cute poem you have penned. It seems as if everything is eating something else! lol Very cute wording and imagery from your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked my fun little poem.

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

This made me smile
because it is rude unexpected and funny in a nutty way.
keep them coming . Don't stop.
smiles are forever.:-)) Z.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked my silly little poem.

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

While I am not familiar with writing or reviewing a sijo, I really like yours. Good use of rhyme. I really got a kick out of the last two lines. Blessings...Christy

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017

Thanks. I wasn't familiar with the sijo either. It started out as a tanka, but it wouldn't quite fit so I went through the contest listings to see if it might work somewhere else. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a funny little poem in which we learn, ultimately, that your ass is a delicacy. The rhyme scheme changes up at the end and makes this work more memorable. Enjoyed the read. Happy day.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Haha, I was wondering why so many people wanted to chew on it. You must be right! Thanks for the review.

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

LOL! This contest poem is great and I love the imagination and creativity needed to pen it! Rhymes are perfect, never strained and I particularly loved the ending! Looks like a winner!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks a lot. I hope it's a winner.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

That would be your boss, saying quit daydreaming and get back to work. A funny poem. We all have been there. It's what makes the world go around.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Are the two of you related? You sound exactly the same. LOL Thanks for the funny review.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

haha. lol. i love the ending although i am not really partial to body jokes dear anonymous! i'm not sure i would call them delicacies but your humor is rather dark.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks. Please don't take the ending literally.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

This made me laugh so much It is witty and the last line is the finishing touch of total brilliance I have no negatives this is just as the British say Smashing lol really tickled me and made me smile well done.m.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017

Thanks. Glad my brilliance made you smile. LOL

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - Well, this is a Sijo - yet another poetry form tht I have not heard of. I had to look up the form. You have the six lines which are permitted. I think you have the correct number of syllables and I'm not sure about the subject matter, but I find what you have written very amusing and you certainly have a surprising twist at the end. As you say - a bit of fun. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017

Thanks. I'd never heard of it either till yesterday. This little piece refused to be a tanka, so I went through the contests to see what else it might be. I came accross this, added a couple of syllables, and Voila! Glad you found it amusing.