No Two are the Same
2-4-2 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from damommy
So true. Even children from large families are not alike, and from my experience with twins, neither are they.
Isn't that wonderful? We're all like snowflakes - unique.
Very nice poem. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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So true. Even children from large families are not alike, and from my experience with twins, neither are they.
Isn't that wonderful? We're all like snowflakes - unique.
Very nice poem. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Hi Yvonne,
Thanks so much for all of your lovely comments :) children live in a world of wonder where everything is like a new surprise for them to learn about. I love that about them the most.
Kim
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I was saying that just this morning.
Comment from rama devi
Perfectly true and well said. Lovely presentation too. I like how the simple closing comes off in a satori-esque flavor. Well done. Superb consonance of S and F.
Enjoyed!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Perfectly true and well said. Lovely presentation too. I like how the simple closing comes off in a satori-esque flavor. Well done. Superb consonance of S and F.
Enjoyed!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Hi rd,
Thank you so much for your skills of analysis, even on the shortest of pieces. :)
*Hugs*
Kim
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:-))))) Hugs!
Comment from frogbook
This sis a very beautiful and well thought subject and poem. So true even if they are in the same family. A very lovely picture you found also.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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This sis a very beautiful and well thought subject and poem. So true even if they are in the same family. A very lovely picture you found also.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Hi frogbook,
I really wrestled with what to put in a 2-4-2. The limitation proves to be quite a challenge. Thank you for the lovely review.
Kim
Comment from LisaD123
This poem uses the allocated syllable count to excellent effect. I enjoyed the originality of the idea and the comparison is very powerful. The accompanying image is wonderful. Good luck for the contest!
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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This poem uses the allocated syllable count to excellent effect. I enjoyed the originality of the idea and the comparison is very powerful. The accompanying image is wonderful. Good luck for the contest!
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Hi Lisa,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate all of your lovely comments.
Kim
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. We are truly unique. Not even identical twins are the same, there is always a tiny difference to tell them apart ad well as their personalities will have differences.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. We are truly unique. Not even identical twins are the same, there is always a tiny difference to tell them apart ad well as their personalities will have differences.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Hi Sandra:
It is hard to know exactly which words or idea to convey in a 2-4-2, but I thought I'd give it a shot. Even a haiku seems easier to me lol Thanks for the lovely review.
Kim
