Ghost Bride
I will be with you no matter what.Dead or alive.15 total reviews
Comment from mvbrooks
Unusual poem as it says she is "jilted" and then says her beloved is dead. If he died--that's not "jilted." She seems to regret ever meeting him, and then kills herself to be with him. The words have a soft flow--but the ideas seem disjointed.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Unusual poem as it says she is "jilted" and then says her beloved is dead. If he died--that's not "jilted." She seems to regret ever meeting him, and then kills herself to be with him. The words have a soft flow--but the ideas seem disjointed.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Thankyou for your helpful review, many thanks, Meia :)
Comment from Nan Beeson
Another compelling post about everlasting love. Your end rhymes were perfect. Yes...they will be united, for it is written in several places in the Bible that "To be absent form the body is to be present with the Lord.
Thank you for sharing it, I truly enjoyed reading it.
Nan:))
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Another compelling post about everlasting love. Your end rhymes were perfect. Yes...they will be united, for it is written in several places in the Bible that "To be absent form the body is to be present with the Lord.
Thank you for sharing it, I truly enjoyed reading it.
Nan:))
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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thanks you so much for your wonderful review!many thanks Meia xx
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You are so welcome.
Nan:))
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
So sad, it seems she cut her wrists to be with him. Another well written poem, Meia, deep, dark, and romantic too. Excellent rhyming, the flow was as smooth as always. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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So sad, it seems she cut her wrists to be with him. Another well written poem, Meia, deep, dark, and romantic too. Excellent rhyming, the flow was as smooth as always. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Yes, she did. For some reason a lot of people have thought of this a necrophilia poem when actually it is about a very real love affair, she was jilted at the altar by a man she met at the funeral of his wife. She nursed him back to life and love only to be jilted on the wedding day. She lies on his grave and slits her wrists, and as she dies she sees his ghost drifting through the mist towards her. Thankyou so much for the lovely and very kind review kindest regards Meia :)
Comment from Ella25
She will never give up on the love she knows. A composition of poetic stanza full of pain and regret balanced with the death. Well done. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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She will never give up on the love she knows. A composition of poetic stanza full of pain and regret balanced with the death. Well done. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your kind and helpful review warmest regards, Meia :)
Comment from Kingsland
I really liked your rhyming of say, way, nay. Nay is a word you don't read that much anymore and it is a very poetic word to say the least. This poem is full of high emotions and was very well-written. Keep up the good poetry and I will keep on reading it... John
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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I really liked your rhyming of say, way, nay. Nay is a word you don't read that much anymore and it is a very poetic word to say the least. This poem is full of high emotions and was very well-written. Keep up the good poetry and I will keep on reading it... John
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your very kind comments.I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, which is meant to be set in the past:hence-Nay,Pet, etc.Thanks again!kindest regards,meia
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Meia - This is a real Gothic story poem, very well written and in true fashion of this type of poem, it has a sad ending. Gorgeous picture! And of course, she decides to join her ghost lover on the 'other' side. Very dramatic and well told. (I also come from the North East pet, LOL) Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Hi Meia - This is a real Gothic story poem, very well written and in true fashion of this type of poem, it has a sad ending. Gorgeous picture! And of course, she decides to join her ghost lover on the 'other' side. Very dramatic and well told. (I also come from the North East pet, LOL) Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your very kind comments.I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, which is meant to be set in the past:hence-Nay,Pet, etc.A fellow North East writer?Thats fantastic! The picture is me aged 18 before I cut off my long hair and it has never gown to that length nor have I been able to return it to that colour since :(Thanks again!kindest regards,meia
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh wow. She was quite determined to join him, I guess. I like this, the picture is beautiful, and this is a haunting love story, blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Oh wow. She was quite determined to join him, I guess. I like this, the picture is beautiful, and this is a haunting love story, blessings...
Comment Written 05-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your very kind comments.I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, which is meant to be set in the past:hence-Nay,Pet, etc.The picture is me aged 18 before I cut off my long hair and it has never gown to that length nor have I been able to return it to that colour since :(Thanks again!kindest regards,meia
Comment from harriswilliam
Interesting, I was had a significant other who accused me of stroking her like a pet, anyway I enjoyed reading your work and it's intriguing.
I'm not much of a critic, so I won't be helpful in giving you advice.
I wish you well as poet.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Interesting, I was had a significant other who accused me of stroking her like a pet, anyway I enjoyed reading your work and it's intriguing.
I'm not much of a critic, so I won't be helpful in giving you advice.
I wish you well as poet.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your lovely and very kind review.In the North of England where I am from Pet is a term of endearment.kind regards, meia :)
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You're welcome. (I need to start using spell check.)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a marvelous story told in lovely poetic form. The rhyme and meter are well executed throughout. I would have to say she fell in love with a ghost and chose to meet him rather than live. Sadly, they will live out eternity betwixt and between most likely sigh. Well done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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This is a marvelous story told in lovely poetic form. The rhyme and meter are well executed throughout. I would have to say she fell in love with a ghost and chose to meet him rather than live. Sadly, they will live out eternity betwixt and between most likely sigh. Well done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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thankyou so much for your lovely and very kind review. I think the poem can definitely be seen from that point of view.kindest regards, Meia x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. Of a love went wrong on the wedding day left alone. Each goes their own way, they may meet again in the afterlife.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Of a love went wrong on the wedding day left alone. Each goes their own way, they may meet again in the afterlife.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your excellent and kind review! kindest regards Meia :)
