Unsafe Sex
Happy...um...dreaming7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen syllable poem, Unsafe Sex, takes the term to the limit when dealing with Freddy Kruger. A girl could really get burned.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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This fifteen syllable poem, Unsafe Sex, takes the term to the limit when dealing with Freddy Kruger. A girl could really get burned.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That was probably a bad idea. Never mind the condom, she needed protection from those hands! I wouldn't want a hug from Fred, and imagine him running his fingers through my hair. Scary! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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That was probably a bad idea. Never mind the condom, she needed protection from those hands! I wouldn't want a hug from Fred, and imagine him running his fingers through my hair. Scary! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem. The nightmare will start when Kim wakes up and realizes what she had done and have to wait until the first signs show.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem. The nightmare will start when Kim wakes up and realizes what she had done and have to wait until the first signs show.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you used your fifteen words to their best advantage. Interesting twist to the entry list with a clever take on tongue in cheek horror. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you used your fifteen words to their best advantage. Interesting twist to the entry list with a clever take on tongue in cheek horror. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Uh-oh!
That does not bode too well for all of us mere mortals, then. If there are a bunch'a little Freddy Kruegers runnin' around all over the place, then we are all as doomed as doomed can be, I must say!
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Thanks for including the musical score too.
~Dean
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Uh-oh!
That does not bode too well for all of us mere mortals, then. If there are a bunch'a little Freddy Kruegers runnin' around all over the place, then we are all as doomed as doomed can be, I must say!
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Thanks for including the musical score too.
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, Dean.
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sis Cat
Oh, yes, Freddie Krueger. This is horrifying poem and well punned message about unprotected sex. Alas, little will protect you from Freddie. Your picture and words are well chosen to give the reader a chill. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Oh, yes, Freddie Krueger. This is horrifying poem and well punned message about unprotected sex. Alas, little will protect you from Freddie. Your picture and words are well chosen to give the reader a chill. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much.
