Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Congratulations on your winning 2-4-4-12 contest entry! You're on a good roll to start the new year! Keep 'em coming, June!
Don

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm trying!

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think the artwork and the background color completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

Words have so much meaning, as does the wonderful artwork.
Puts me in a very special, thankful mood.
Good
Hearted
Woman

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

This is a touching poem that almost seems as if it is conceived with the loss of a child. Emotive, honest and heartbreaking.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thank you for your insightful review.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line and syllable count. You deliver a serenely blissful expression of lasting love in this well penned piece. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind comments.