Mom and Dad
A 5-7-5 poem on Death5 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
They both are long gone,5
cherished in my memories,7
comfort beyond words.5
They both are long gone, cherished in my memories, comfort beyond words.
Excellent syllabic count and context... the words flow smoothly.
Hello, my friend,
you made me cry ... this is such a lovely tribute to your parents, I am sure they are watching you from heaven and feeling really proud.
I can't help to envy them for having each other and such a strong bond that they had to be together after death. They could not live without each other. That is what love is all about.
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They both are long gone,5
cherished in my memories,7
comfort beyond words.5
They both are long gone, cherished in my memories, comfort beyond words.
Excellent syllabic count and context... the words flow smoothly.
Hello, my friend,
you made me cry ... this is such a lovely tribute to your parents, I am sure they are watching you from heaven and feeling really proud.
I can't help to envy them for having each other and such a strong bond that they had to be together after death. They could not live without each other. That is what love is all about.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2016
Comment from BeasPeas
Mine are gone, too. Memories keep them alive for us. A sweet photo and I'm assuming they are your mom and dad as I don't see credit anywhere for it. They look very happy together in this picture. A wonderful tribute to them. Marilyn
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Mine are gone, too. Memories keep them alive for us. A sweet photo and I'm assuming they are your mom and dad as I don't see credit anywhere for it. They look very happy together in this picture. A wonderful tribute to them. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-Dec-2016
Comment from Mary Wakeford
My sympathies in the loss of your parents. No matter how many years pass, the pain is still palpable. You've created a beautiful tribute to then with this poem.
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My sympathies in the loss of your parents. No matter how many years pass, the pain is still palpable. You've created a beautiful tribute to then with this poem.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
Comment from DALLAS01
Mine are gone also and the holidays the memories are still so vibrant. Nice alliteration and assonance. That is a lovely photo. The love is spilling over.
Thanks for sharing.
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Mine are gone also and the holidays the memories are still so vibrant. Nice alliteration and assonance. That is a lovely photo. The love is spilling over.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written to lose both parents must be very hard but they leave behind precious memories well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Yes this is very well written to lose both parents must be very hard but they leave behind precious memories well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
