Blessing From Children
It is the little ones that mean so much.25 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A very well-written story. Your words flowed well line to line from beginning to end. You are right about children today not learning to write thank you notes. They do not even teach handwriting in the schools anymore. The children are growing up without being taught manners or any form of respect or how to be polite. If a parent or relative does not teach them they are on their own.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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A very well-written story. Your words flowed well line to line from beginning to end. You are right about children today not learning to write thank you notes. They do not even teach handwriting in the schools anymore. The children are growing up without being taught manners or any form of respect or how to be polite. If a parent or relative does not teach them they are on their own.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review, Winnona.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It also takes the special person that receives these little ones into her life with love and caring and shows interest in what they are doing. You have also been who God meant you to be.
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It also takes the special person that receives these little ones into her life with love and caring and shows interest in what they are doing. You have also been who God meant you to be.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review, Barb.
Comment from mbroyles2
Children will always hold a special place in my heart. They are easily molded and their innocence reflects joy to all who come in contact.
A special note filled with loving emotion.
Nicely done!
Michael
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Children will always hold a special place in my heart. They are easily molded and their innocence reflects joy to all who come in contact.
A special note filled with loving emotion.
Nicely done!
Michael
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review, Michael.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
Your poem is really nice that you've written. I did see some tiny mistakes though. In verse 3 Their little arms aroune (change the "e" to "d") feel (put an ("s") Then it reads: Their little arms around my neck feels so very special.
If you don't want me to show your mistakes just tell me.
Kat
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Hi Patricia,
Your poem is really nice that you've written. I did see some tiny mistakes though. In verse 3 Their little arms aroune (change the "e" to "d") feel (put an ("s") Then it reads: Their little arms around my neck feels so very special.
If you don't want me to show your mistakes just tell me.
Kat
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review, Kat. Problems fixed. Thanks for the help.
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Hi Patricia, I'm glad that you didn't mind me telling you about the little mistakes you mad. Kat
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
There is no heart as deserving of such special blessings as yours. Coming from children they are all the more precious as the innocence and purity of a child's soul rings out more clearly than ever to heaven's waiting ears. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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There is no heart as deserving of such special blessings as yours. Coming from children they are all the more precious as the innocence and purity of a child's soul rings out more clearly than ever to heaven's waiting ears. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the lovely review, Angel.
