Once upon the heart..
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Only you..."Love poems
46 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Oh-MY, Susan!
I think your brand of heart-wealth may have become so addictive I may never break the habit, but it's more than a wee bit obvious I'm not alone in these sentiments.
This one exceeds the bounds of fairness, as my emotion finds itself floating between the existence of this world and your own.
Your palette is covered with hues, textures, colors that stroke across the canvas of mind and imagination in such a way all senses culminate into a velvet sighhh!
Ere I've worn out my welcome, let me close with a wink 'n a smile of most grateful appreciation and awe of the lady, the poetess, you most undeniably are ... hugs 'n blessings to You for sharing, and for an amazing 2017! ~ Richard ; )
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Oh-MY, Susan!
I think your brand of heart-wealth may have become so addictive I may never break the habit, but it's more than a wee bit obvious I'm not alone in these sentiments.
This one exceeds the bounds of fairness, as my emotion finds itself floating between the existence of this world and your own.
Your palette is covered with hues, textures, colors that stroke across the canvas of mind and imagination in such a way all senses culminate into a velvet sighhh!
Ere I've worn out my welcome, let me close with a wink 'n a smile of most grateful appreciation and awe of the lady, the poetess, you most undeniably are ... hugs 'n blessings to You for sharing, and for an amazing 2017! ~ Richard ; )
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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A velvet sighhhhhh has my mind whirling with thoughts...and perhaps another poem!!!.. lol Richard, your review are so much better then the poem!!! Thank you!!
Comment from Saucey
Breathtaking piece I love the flow of words rolling down the page like butter on hotcakes. My fav "dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays" Great presentation. So worthy of All Time Best. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Breathtaking piece I love the flow of words rolling down the page like butter on hotcakes. My fav "dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays" Great presentation. So worthy of All Time Best. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Butter on hotcakes!!!!.well, now there is a love poem in the making!!!! thank you for reading and the great review!!
Comment from DR DIP
What a beautiful write as usual Susan you definitely have a beautiful way with words
While I'm at it, have a wonderful new year. thanks for sharing as always
xxdip
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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What a beautiful write as usual Susan you definitely have a beautiful way with words
While I'm at it, have a wonderful new year. thanks for sharing as always
xxdip
Comment Written 31-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Happy New Year dear Dip!!! and thank you...
Comment from DALLAS01
A beautiful combination of artwork, background color, and verse.
I especially like the last line :dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays.
And nice alliteration of the letter (h) in the second stanza.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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A beautiful combination of artwork, background color, and verse.
I especially like the last line :dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays.
And nice alliteration of the letter (h) in the second stanza.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading and the sweet review!! I do appreciate it!!
Comment from Cory G
Bittersweet. I especially like the last verse: let the word spin by...no longer going their ways...dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays. Good picture chosen - dreamlike. The font fits the theme. Well written.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Bittersweet. I especially like the last verse: let the word spin by...no longer going their ways...dark loneliness lives in our yesterdays. Good picture chosen - dreamlike. The font fits the theme. Well written.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and for this sweet review!!! I do appreciate it!! :-)
Comment from flylikeaneagle
SusanJohn: enjoy the mystery man of your life. Keep shining with your star.
We all desire love and precious memories.Keep aligning in your assignment of
joy. Enjoy your new year. I like the rhymes and photo. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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SusanJohn: enjoy the mystery man of your life. Keep shining with your star.
We all desire love and precious memories.Keep aligning in your assignment of
joy. Enjoy your new year. I like the rhymes and photo. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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what a great review!!! thank you so very much and happy New year to you too!! :-)))
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Beautiful, eloquent and elegant take on love as a concept.The dark tones of the piece complement it wisely,beacons of love...my daydreams unfold...wonderful writing!!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Beautiful, eloquent and elegant take on love as a concept.The dark tones of the piece complement it wisely,beacons of love...my daydreams unfold...wonderful writing!!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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aww thank you so much for this great review!! I'm smiling! :-)))
Comment from Leineco
Sometimes I think the best thing about love
is its power to heal and raise us back up
from the quagmire that we managed to stumble into.
Your poem reminds us that that kind of love
shines with undeniable brilliance :-)
Very nicely done!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Sometimes I think the best thing about love
is its power to heal and raise us back up
from the quagmire that we managed to stumble into.
Your poem reminds us that that kind of love
shines with undeniable brilliance :-)
Very nicely done!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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awww such a sweet review!!! Thank you so very much!!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Only you..." is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read an review a piece of this standard.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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"Only you..." is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read an review a piece of this standard.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Well thank you very much!!! I appreciate you reading and reviewing!!! :-)
Comment from crzypnter
Hi Susan,
As a person that loves to write romantic poetry, I love this one. I love the way you meander down with great alliteration and then end so sublimely. Thanks for sharing God bless and happy New Year
August
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Hi Susan,
As a person that loves to write romantic poetry, I love this one. I love the way you meander down with great alliteration and then end so sublimely. Thanks for sharing God bless and happy New Year
August
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Thank you for such a wonderful review!!!!! I'll have to for sure check out your writings!! :-))
