Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tyburn, Slightly Knightly, has the correct set up brings to mind the image of that special someone who has arrived on the scene and proven to be all that was hoped and needed in one's life. Nice.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review. I thought slightly knightly could describe someone reluctant to be the hero, cheers, j

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. The artwork completed the piece. Your words flowed and combined well forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

I've read a couple of these tyburn poems this morning, and I must say, this one is so engaging. I guess because of the prince and the knight theme. What women could not get resist being swept off her feet by a fairy tale?

Technically, you mastered the poetic form quite nicely (without sounding forced).

Good luck in the contest,

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. It was a fun write and that's what I like about this site, trying new styles. Wishing you a Merry Christmas, cheers, j

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Really nice.
This isn't an easy style to write and I think you did a great job.
You painted a vivid image with these descriptive words.
Happy Holidays
Michael

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review Michael. Wishing you a peaceful Christmas, all the best in the new year, cheers, j