One Eyed Man
Satire on spiritual perception46 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there Jaybird
This is a fabulous poem. You really are a talented writer. I particularly like the last stanza and the sattire. Well done. Blessings. Jen.
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Hi there Jaybird
This is a fabulous poem. You really are a talented writer. I particularly like the last stanza and the sattire. Well done. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
I really like your poetry. It's not strained or forced, and more importantly, it makes sense. It's not jibber-jabber but a statement one can read and understand. It moves smoothly with no forced meter or rhyme. Well done. Cowboy
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I really like your poetry. It's not strained or forced, and more importantly, it makes sense. It's not jibber-jabber but a statement one can read and understand. It moves smoothly with no forced meter or rhyme. Well done. Cowboy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are strong, interesting and thought provoking.
The poem flows and connects well. The reader liked the author's
notes and pondered on her faith. Blessings.......harmony13
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The author's words are strong, interesting and thought provoking.
The poem flows and connects well. The reader liked the author's
notes and pondered on her faith. Blessings.......harmony13
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"One Eyed Man", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Not for a moment would I attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical question. This is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"One Eyed Man", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Not for a moment would I attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical question. This is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from coffeeandink
The last stanza was written through a telescope, I enjoyed reading it. From closure into the vast beyond, and why we limit our potential, is only known, when it has again moved. Well written.
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The last stanza was written through a telescope, I enjoyed reading it. From closure into the vast beyond, and why we limit our potential, is only known, when it has again moved. Well written.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from meeshu
Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. so called handicaps are self-invented Very well done, Jaybird........................meeshu
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Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. so called handicaps are self-invented Very well done, Jaybird........................meeshu
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a compelling and powerful message you convey in this well-written piece about finding faith.
He studied faith's theologies/ and watched their wars unfold...
His two eyed friends excuses were-
"These things have been foretold". What a poignant stanza!
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What a compelling and powerful message you convey in this well-written piece about finding faith.
He studied faith's theologies/ and watched their wars unfold...
His two eyed friends excuses were-
"These things have been foretold". What a poignant stanza!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from JanPerry
An interesting commentary about a man with beliefs and attitudes on religion and war history. His one eyed life is regrettable but you say who wouldn't have seen such things in life otherwise.
One-eyed opinions are those which don't have another side, and he didn't seem to be like that.
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An interesting commentary about a man with beliefs and attitudes on religion and war history. His one eyed life is regrettable but you say who wouldn't have seen such things in life otherwise.
One-eyed opinions are those which don't have another side, and he didn't seem to be like that.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from akey
This is a wonderful poem. It reminds of my dad. I believe some of us know what is on the other side. I read this poem 3 times it pulled me in every time. Thank you for an insight on the journey of life and death.
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This is a wonderful poem. It reminds of my dad. I believe some of us know what is on the other side. I read this poem 3 times it pulled me in every time. Thank you for an insight on the journey of life and death.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
We do truly see with the eyes of faith better than we ever see with one or two eyes.
To God be the glory. Thank you for this poem and for pointing us to eternity
Well done. I love your wise good sense
God bless
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We do truly see with the eyes of faith better than we ever see with one or two eyes.
To God be the glory. Thank you for this poem and for pointing us to eternity
Well done. I love your wise good sense
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
