One Eyed Man
Satire on spiritual perception46 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
Brilliant!! Our eyes will never see what God has waiting...only fools look for that which they cannot fathom. Your work is balm to the weary soul and water in the dessert. Thank you.
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Brilliant!! Our eyes will never see what God has waiting...only fools look for that which they cannot fathom. Your work is balm to the weary soul and water in the dessert. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
Comment from Thal1959
Excellent piece. Beautiful rhymes and expressions. A very interesting subject that develops smoothly with a balanced rhythm. You got my last six star review for the week. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Excellent piece. Beautiful rhymes and expressions. A very interesting subject that develops smoothly with a balanced rhythm. You got my last six star review for the week. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for that great rating.Belated Xmas wishes for you
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You're welcome.
Comment from frierajac
I like this poem and the thought it contains because I have known someone who
is blind in one eye ( and as they say, can't see out of the other) The definition of a neurotic being that they just can't seems to give up their own side of things to the
powers that be.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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I like this poem and the thought it contains because I have known someone who
is blind in one eye ( and as they say, can't see out of the other) The definition of a neurotic being that they just can't seems to give up their own side of things to the
powers that be.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for that great rating. Best belated Xmas wishes for you
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Another very good poem. You are becoming the poet laureate of FanStory> It seem even with your eyes closed, you see more than most.
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Another very good poem. You are becoming the poet laureate of FanStory> It seem even with your eyes closed, you see more than most.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
Comment from papa55mike
What a well written poem challenging man to only see with his heart, not his eyes. Faith is what we need to live for. I wish I had a six for you.
Merry Christmas!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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What a well written poem challenging man to only see with his heart, not his eyes. Faith is what we need to live for. I wish I had a six for you.
Merry Christmas!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging comment
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I hope he is seeing the blessings of being on the Other Side and have all his questions answered by the only One Who knows. Many a blind person have believed without the skill of sight. I like the juxtaposition of physical and spiritual sight and ending with a question.
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Well, I hope he is seeing the blessings of being on the Other Side and have all his questions answered by the only One Who knows. Many a blind person have believed without the skill of sight. I like the juxtaposition of physical and spiritual sight and ending with a question.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great poem. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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This is a very good poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great poem. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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I wish to thank you for your encouraging comment. Have a nice Xmas
Comment from BeasPeas
Nice tight writing with good rhyming throughout. This is an interesting poem, especially the last stanza and your author's note. Some are more limited in sight than others. It would be nice if we could all be on the same page--a lifting of group conscience. Till then, we're all going in different directions. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Nice tight writing with good rhyming throughout. This is an interesting poem, especially the last stanza and your author's note. Some are more limited in sight than others. It would be nice if we could all be on the same page--a lifting of group conscience. Till then, we're all going in different directions. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you Beas and belated Xmas wishes for you
Comment from Irish Rain
I think the other side is beautiful. And my own personal belief is that it WILL be, because I believe it. I think we wind up with exactly what we believe, or the essence thereof. Which is why those with no beliefs can wind up feeling hopeless, and Catholics experience a purgatory. I love your poem, and agree with your notes. Just believe. Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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I think the other side is beautiful. And my own personal belief is that it WILL be, because I believe it. I think we wind up with exactly what we believe, or the essence thereof. Which is why those with no beliefs can wind up feeling hopeless, and Catholics experience a purgatory. I love your poem, and agree with your notes. Just believe. Blessings...
Comment Written 19-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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I appreciate your support.Would make more comments if my 91 year eyes would allow.Have anice Xmas
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Merry Christmas to you!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
There is only one way we can get through life and finally reach the destination by living each day one day at a to.e the best we can n faith and trust in the Lord.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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There is only one way we can get through life and finally reach the destination by living each day one day at a to.e the best we can n faith and trust in the Lord.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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I agree. Thank you for your continued support
