Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Beautiful artwork.

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Hi Winnona. Thank you very much for my first review for this poem I have not been on line for a while and thought I would try to get back and spotted this contest and thought I would have a try so many Cheers to you

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

The artwork you choose to go with your poem its a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start
I found your poem to be a very interesting read.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Hi Cookie, I thank you for taking the time to read and send me a review, have been a little quiet of late and thought I need to get back so this contest snared me in I do appreciate your words. Cheers

reply by misscookie on 18-Dec-2016

You're very welcome, i understand.
Until next time.
Cookie