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Thoughts About Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "1-6-1 poem"
My Collection of Love Poetry

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Well they do say love takes care of all things.
Nicely done with the rhyming added. Makes it flow very nicely.
This would have been good in a contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
    I am too cheap to pay to compete (against far more talented poets) I tried a couple of times. Thanks so much.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
    I am too cheap to pay to compete (against far more talented poets) I tried a couple of times. Thanks so much.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Bucketlist, a brief but concise message in this 1-6-1 poem. You have rhymed it well to relay some wise advice. Nicely done on this enjoyable piece. ~DD

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of the poem is an intermediary's touting of the option of "mate" to an antagonist found neck-deep in disseminating "hate".

The work highlights polar dichotomies between the two options and the resolve of the "intermediary" to trade "date" as panacea.

Excellent work! Bravo!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your wonderful review and stars
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 12-Dec-2016
    Remain Blessed!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
    You too , you have an amazing interpretive brain