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Free Verse--Roast Contest68 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hmmmmm, marshmallows. I could never figure out how to roast them without burning them.
This is a terrific free verse poem, that roars along at a good steady pace. You've managed to toast to just a nice pleasant brown a few of your favourite authors on the site and got yourself singed in the process. It happens every single time.
Great job, Mav. You rocked this contest with a fantastic roast post.
Best of luck in the contest.
Ange
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Hmmmmm, marshmallows. I could never figure out how to roast them without burning them.
This is a terrific free verse poem, that roars along at a good steady pace. You've managed to toast to just a nice pleasant brown a few of your favourite authors on the site and got yourself singed in the process. It happens every single time.
Great job, Mav. You rocked this contest with a fantastic roast post.
Best of luck in the contest.
Ange
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from EricBrady
A wonderful roast of so many aaannd yourself? A great laugh and i'm sure they all love it. The Queen of Haiku and the Prince of Darkness do make a good FS couple, don't they. I absolutely love it and another wonderful contender for the prize. Man, this is going to be interesting. Best wishes in the contest.
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A wonderful roast of so many aaannd yourself? A great laugh and i'm sure they all love it. The Queen of Haiku and the Prince of Darkness do make a good FS couple, don't they. I absolutely love it and another wonderful contender for the prize. Man, this is going to be interesting. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from LIJ Red
If they said, hey you're the joke, they all get together and laugh about your shit, well, I'd say "And--?" This seems like an excellent outburst to me. And you started naming names...
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If they said, hey you're the joke, they all get together and laugh about your shit, well, I'd say "And--?" This seems like an excellent outburst to me. And you started naming names...
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from trumby
Very well written roast poem, nice entry to the contest too. A very humorous and interesting poem roasting most popular writers in the site. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest.
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Very well written roast poem, nice entry to the contest too. A very humorous and interesting poem roasting most popular writers in the site. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from krys123
Really enjoyed this one, Mike;
-what I heckuva roast with all the toast of people involved who have different thing solved and none of them like to give burnt. You have your toasting roast down to a science but not that much of reliance when you talk about people that can't respond.
-Really well done rhyming and certain areas of your poem that are linked to a certain type of meter that reads as if it is written in meter but I know it is not.
-A good lash out on Gypsy which is done harmlessly but well composed.
-So your band and 12 states but you did not relate why so if I'm a spy with my left eye of probably understand why you have and they date. Chuckle!
-I am enjoyed this very much and so it is such that I will relieve myself here and so very near that I'll contact you later so see you alligator.
Alex
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Really enjoyed this one, Mike;
-what I heckuva roast with all the toast of people involved who have different thing solved and none of them like to give burnt. You have your toasting roast down to a science but not that much of reliance when you talk about people that can't respond.
-Really well done rhyming and certain areas of your poem that are linked to a certain type of meter that reads as if it is written in meter but I know it is not.
-A good lash out on Gypsy which is done harmlessly but well composed.
-So your band and 12 states but you did not relate why so if I'm a spy with my left eye of probably understand why you have and they date. Chuckle!
-I am enjoyed this very much and so it is such that I will relieve myself here and so very near that I'll contact you later so see you alligator.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from mermaids
This is clever and creative. I enjoyed reading it and it is fun to poke fun at ourselves on this site. "No wonder I howl when I pee" had me laughing so hard, I almost fell off the bed. Thanks for a nice break from the day.
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This is clever and creative. I enjoyed reading it and it is fun to poke fun at ourselves on this site. "No wonder I howl when I pee" had me laughing so hard, I almost fell off the bed. Thanks for a nice break from the day.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but smile as I read. You did a wonderful job writing this poem/roast. Your talent shines through. Good write.
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I couldn't help but smile as I read. You did a wonderful job writing this poem/roast. Your talent shines through. Good write.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from angel123
Wow! What a well written rant! But it's all in good natured loving gregarious fun right! Your poem flows and rhymes well and your imagination is very vivid. Good alliteration of words through out your poem and your message is clear and to the point. Your artwork enhances your point.
angel123
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Wow! What a well written rant! But it's all in good natured loving gregarious fun right! Your poem flows and rhymes well and your imagination is very vivid. Good alliteration of words through out your poem and your message is clear and to the point. Your artwork enhances your point.
angel123
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from DR DIP
Mikey!! I love it I love banter and sledging this is right up my alley.I am fugly too! You have written this with a lot of thought and I am sure the roastees in Dean and gypsy will see the funny sise I would be honoured to have shit put on me..it means people are reading my crap haha
well done
dip
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Mikey!! I love it I love banter and sledging this is right up my alley.I am fugly too! You have written this with a lot of thought and I am sure the roastees in Dean and gypsy will see the funny sise I would be honoured to have shit put on me..it means people are reading my crap haha
well done
dip
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I usually stay clear of roasts, because although they are fun for most, there is usually someone who either takes it too far, or those who keep their feeling on their sleeves and end up getting mad. But I must admit, I sure do enjoy reading them from a distance. Great job. :-)
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Well, I usually stay clear of roasts, because although they are fun for most, there is usually someone who either takes it too far, or those who keep their feeling on their sleeves and end up getting mad. But I must admit, I sure do enjoy reading them from a distance. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
