Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

Very nice 1-6-1. congratulations on the win. You hit the nail on the head that everyone should be free to be with whom they agree.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

You wrote an interesting poem. It flows and rhymes well and you followed the contest rules. Your artwork choice goes well with your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Excellent entry, enhanced greatly by the picture. Good seamless rhyming and strong theme. The only critique i can offer is that the poem has a more specific and powerful meaning in the context of the photo, and without the photo, it is too 'general' and less impacting. Thus, I suggest giving the context via a strong specific title that hints at the underlying message pertaining to Gay marriage, perhaps metaphorically if not directly.
Just a thought~


Good luck!

Congrats! - if the picture it you...beautiful!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.

reply by rama devi on 11-Dec-2016

:-)

Comment from sanejane

Excellent

Wouldn't it be great? It may (or may not) initially increase sexual abuse, but in the long term it would probably reduce it. It may make women more determined to avoid or reduce obesity, but it could also make girls with low self-esteem even more ashamed of their bodies - or not. It would be interesting to find out.

This is a superb, thought-provoking 1-6-1. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thank you very much.