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All That Jazz (a diatelle)

Made for jumpin'

2 total reviews 
Comment from bertranclan
Excellent
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Enjoyed this rhyming piece. It really woke me up as I was falling asleep before! Love the line, "Even in Alcatraz, jazz became known..." Keep perfecting the craft!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
    Working hard on it! Thanks for the encouraging words.
Comment from WalkerMan
Excellent
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This is a well-constructed diatelle that both flows smoothly and fits its topic nicely. Also, the rhymes work without seeming forced. Well done, and aptly illustrated.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much!
reply by WalkerMan on 07-Dec-2016
    You are welcome. -- Mike