To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Buried Treasure"Poems by Michael
6 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
What powerful images you create with these words... words that chime together in beautiful sounds and stir emotions deep down. I'm amazed yet again at the way you use language. "Fruit succulent orange blossomed youth" is especially strong and rich in sensory appeal. And I love the sound of "all abundant pungent life," when read aloud, as well as, "digested preciousness tastes worshipped," I can't imagine how you come up with such unique phrasing but your poetry fascinates and stirs me and makes mine seem pretty blah by comparison. You sparkle, Michael... like a clear night sky full of countless stars. I love the sky. It is ever-changing, and always amazingly beautiful. MM
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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What powerful images you create with these words... words that chime together in beautiful sounds and stir emotions deep down. I'm amazed yet again at the way you use language. "Fruit succulent orange blossomed youth" is especially strong and rich in sensory appeal. And I love the sound of "all abundant pungent life," when read aloud, as well as, "digested preciousness tastes worshipped," I can't imagine how you come up with such unique phrasing but your poetry fascinates and stirs me and makes mine seem pretty blah by comparison. You sparkle, Michael... like a clear night sky full of countless stars. I love the sky. It is ever-changing, and always amazingly beautiful. MM
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Blah...is not in your repertoire Meadow.
and Diamonds shine all the time. -smile-...Good morning Sunrise
what a pleasant surprise you present to these eyes. thank you for the vitamin see. love always Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
Hey Mike, hope all is well and your Holidays are Blessed.
This pieace wad rich in Religeous thoughts.
As usual Theme as well as Imagery...
'Top Notched.'
Be well Mike and may you have 'Fair Winds' in your 'Sails of Life.'
Richard...
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Hey Mike, hope all is well and your Holidays are Blessed.
This pieace wad rich in Religeous thoughts.
As usual Theme as well as Imagery...
'Top Notched.'
Be well Mike and may you have 'Fair Winds' in your 'Sails of Life.'
Richard...
Comment Written 04-Dec-2016
Comment from closetpoetjester
Your writing has such allure Michael and I so often have to entertain a second read to glean the meaning. Just when I think I have it, I'm not so sure I have it at all...
With that said, it looks like you've found what you're after here and feel the need to look no further. Way to go you shipwrecked harbinger! Enjoy the fruits in those sails and digesting that preciousness in the company of your last dinner guest!
Sass
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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Your writing has such allure Michael and I so often have to entertain a second read to glean the meaning. Just when I think I have it, I'm not so sure I have it at all...
With that said, it looks like you've found what you're after here and feel the need to look no further. Way to go you shipwrecked harbinger! Enjoy the fruits in those sails and digesting that preciousness in the company of your last dinner guest!
Sass
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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alluring...hm...like garter belts and black lace hardly underwear...? nirvana lives, huh...? or that my words dont stop should be passionately scratched into flesh. is that what you mean. Sass...? it is right...? right...? aha...smile-...thank you Tiger wild...it is always my pleasure to enter-tame you.
ahh now, I look no further to replace irreplaceable...nor should have to.
she will always be and remain uniquely special and quintessential measurer of a women's full grown potential.
however there are those and always will be would be conquerors. far be it from me to stand in the way of testing...testing...123...I'm not an animal you know. love Michael
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LOL Entertamed?? NOT a chance Mower Man xx
But I DID enjoy it.
Yep, I know what it's like to be irreplacable...haha, just ask the other half. T'aint nothin' that could replace this bit of sass haha
Sassyfrassy
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well I'm convinced thats a fact jack....and that ta to catch a tiger by her tail takes a jungles effort. but I shall safari on, until ecstasy is my kitten, -crack-...-smile-
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If you go down to the woods today...
Comment from frierajac
Manna is a word from the Old Testament. It does seem out of place. The rest of the poem seems to form a unified whole with the harbinger, the ships the fruits and the images of something, her, leading one on.
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Manna is a word from the Old Testament. It does seem out of place. The rest of the poem seems to form a unified whole with the harbinger, the ships the fruits and the images of something, her, leading one on.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This is very nice and oddly sad to me, Michael. The music put this up and over for a sixer, buddy. It added a special element to set a surreal tone, almost personal in fact. Great work. I do wonder if a coma between heaven here on each usage might help with the reading cadence. Simply wonderful poem, Bruce.
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This is very nice and oddly sad to me, Michael. The music put this up and over for a sixer, buddy. It added a special element to set a surreal tone, almost personal in fact. Great work. I do wonder if a coma between heaven here on each usage might help with the reading cadence. Simply wonderful poem, Bruce.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
Comment from Joan E.
I was intrigued by your picture selection--it looks like the wooden hull of an old ship and parallels your poem perfectly. I enjoyed your "desert island" and "ambrosia" in "pursuit of happiness". Smiles and happy weekend- Joan
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I was intrigued by your picture selection--it looks like the wooden hull of an old ship and parallels your poem perfectly. I enjoyed your "desert island" and "ambrosia" in "pursuit of happiness". Smiles and happy weekend- Joan
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
