Naughty Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Defunct love"Caution a Collection of Mature Thoughts
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written so many couples today that stay together just because they get used to each other , not realizing what it is doing to them , their relationship is dead but they cannot bear to part sometimes that's the only way regards Jill
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Yes this is well written so many couples today that stay together just because they get used to each other , not realizing what it is doing to them , their relationship is dead but they cannot bear to part sometimes that's the only way regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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I know someone like that. I agree, sometimes it's for the children's sake ( not good) thanks for your review and input.
Comment from LaRosa
"I've waited, waited far too long"
This poem starts with the important premise. It states the fact and then proves it.
The poet skillfully, artfully expresses the bewilderment, fear, and loss of what it's like to live a life hiding. She draws from the reader emotions before he knows it's happening.
I should be reviewing structurally and all I can think is...Is my daughter writing this?
I pray that this writer doesn't feel it's too late to start again. She's worth it!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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"I've waited, waited far too long"
This poem starts with the important premise. It states the fact and then proves it.
The poet skillfully, artfully expresses the bewilderment, fear, and loss of what it's like to live a life hiding. She draws from the reader emotions before he knows it's happening.
I should be reviewing structurally and all I can think is...Is my daughter writing this?
I pray that this writer doesn't feel it's too late to start again. She's worth it!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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I hope it's not your daughter's situation. They say it's never too late ( unless one is dead of course LOL) thanks for your review and encouragement
Comment from sanejane
Sometimes it takes a long time to recognise abuse, and it can be difficult to get it validated when your friends and family think you're a great couple, and can't see what's happening.
You say:
So mentally I've become more drained
at least I'm lucky you never maimed
It can be harder to leave someone who tortures you mentally, as you become so demoralised, and nobody believes you because thereare no bruises. also, emotional damage can take longer to heal.
It's good that you are writing this; healthy for you and useful to others who may read and realize that they are in a similar situation.
Thank you for sharing this lovely, heartfelt poem.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Sometimes it takes a long time to recognise abuse, and it can be difficult to get it validated when your friends and family think you're a great couple, and can't see what's happening.
You say:
So mentally I've become more drained
at least I'm lucky you never maimed
It can be harder to leave someone who tortures you mentally, as you become so demoralised, and nobody believes you because thereare no bruises. also, emotional damage can take longer to heal.
It's good that you are writing this; healthy for you and useful to others who may read and realize that they are in a similar situation.
Thank you for sharing this lovely, heartfelt poem.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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You are so welcome. Thank you for taking the time to expand your thoughts. It is much appreciated, also for the compliments.
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You're welcome :)
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow this is me today. I could have written this. Not as complete or beaurtifully as this. This is so heartfelt and wonderful. rhyme and flow is very good.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Wow this is me today. I could have written this. Not as complete or beaurtifully as this. This is so heartfelt and wonderful. rhyme and flow is very good.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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I'm sure you could write it equally as well. Thank you for exceptional wordage. I'm glad you liked it (not the subject)
Comment from Writer51
Very good poem, despite the fact that it is a dark subject. But it is very real and widespread. It has to be talked about. The meter here was very even, and the rhyme was right on the mark. Job well done.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Very good poem, despite the fact that it is a dark subject. But it is very real and widespread. It has to be talked about. The meter here was very even, and the rhyme was right on the mark. Job well done.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Great feedback - I am happy that people enjoy it, thanks again
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Your poem tells a true story of so very many people. My first husband was an abuser in so many ways. This is very nicely done. Good work
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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Excellent. Your poem tells a true story of so very many people. My first husband was an abuser in so many ways. This is very nicely done. Good work
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
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I know it's a rough subject, but it is so frequent woman can relate to it (and some men) it's all easily deniable if there is no physical evidence .
Thanks for reviewing and your kind comments
