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To Last Forever

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Poems by Michael

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Comment from lancellot
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Ah, very serene and with parts that reflect this holiday season too. This kind of reads like a series of Haiku, each telling a different facet of one tale.

Very well crafted.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

Comment from William Ross
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Nicely done on the free verse on voyage, a voyage of freedom and thankfulness, Nicely done. thanks for the share and have a great day

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

Comment from Writer51
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It's a poem that carries with it a soft aura. The subject of the moon is always one of calmness. The accompanying song and video aide the message of the poem.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016