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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "I Drank the Elixir of Youth"
Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
2 total reviews
Comment from
winnona
A well-written poem. The words flow line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork is well-chosen and completed the piece well.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
When I read your comments, I feel you touched my spirit. You captured my feelings. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Youth; such a small period of our life and yet; we worship it, in spite of knowing, it is but an ephemeral stage of our existence.
Comment from
tfawcus
There is nothing like the passing of another birthday to remind us that time is passing and to make us think on the implications of that. It is a comfort to believe that death is not the end, but only part of the eternal cycle. Nicely written.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
You have captured the message not expressed by the words. I feel gratified that the subliminal communication came through. Thanks for your comments. You are a spiritual being.
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