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Random Reflections.

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "I Drank the Elixir of Youth"
Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.

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Comment from winnona
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A well-written poem. The words flow line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork is well-chosen and completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
    When I read your comments, I feel you touched my spirit. You captured my feelings. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Youth; such a small period of our life and yet; we worship it, in spite of knowing, it is but an ephemeral stage of our existence.
Comment from tfawcus
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There is nothing like the passing of another birthday to remind us that time is passing and to make us think on the implications of that. It is a comfort to believe that death is not the end, but only part of the eternal cycle. Nicely written.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
    You have captured the message not expressed by the words. I feel gratified that the subliminal communication came through. Thanks for your comments. You are a spiritual being.