Comment from RoostyNester

Exceptional

How cute, for a horrifying 5-7-5 poem. I loved the humor of the horrible story of the tainted pork. Around Thanksgiving, there will probably be a lot of pigs at the table. haha Nice poem. I loved it.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

That's what I'd hoped, Janice, and that it would cause an involuntary shiver in a few readers.
Unfortunately, the voters didn't see it the way you did, and subsequently, I got my butt spanked in a contest that I created, 9 votes to 4.
Oh, the humanity!
Anyhow, I'm glad you liked it.
I sure could'a used your vote yesterday.
At least the loss wouldn't have looked so ugly, lol...
~Dean

reply by RoostyNester on 27-Nov-2016

I loved your poem. It's hard to believe that people could say anything bad about your poems. I love them! Too many people have forgotten how to laugh. They live their lives being critical of every tiny thing. Your poem was wonderful.

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016

Comment from Daniel Silverhawk

Exceptional

Fantastic! Scary, revulsion, and sadistic. A cannibalistic pig eating tainted pork. This poem is suey- t. And I love the picture you chose. His own hand stuck in the grinder. Will he also eat the tainted pork? Perhaps.
Also great finish adding Porky Pig and his famous looney toon send off. Bravo. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

Thanks very much for taking the time to read this crazy thing, Daniel. I'm really pleased to know that you got a laugh out of this, and that you enjoyed it enough to rate it as highly as you did.
Unfortunately, the feeling was not a mutual one amongst those who voted in this contest.
I got my butt handed to me, 9 votes to 4.
Much obliged.
Enjoy your weekend.
~Dean

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Hey DK...
Hey no violence here - just good clean fun as I see it. Good luck in this contest. I hope no one tries to grind you down. Pulled pork jokes never get old. (haha)
Bill

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

I got my butt SPANKED in this contest, Bill.
9 votes to 4, so you're a little too late.
Thanks very much for reading just the same.
~Dean

reply by Bill O'Bier on 25-Nov-2016

Sorry man - I'd of voted for you, but I missed this booth. Sometimes I wonder about contests, you get all these great comments - then when the voting time comes...pop goes the weasel.
Anyway... all the best,
Bill

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

All the best to you as well, Bill.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Dean
Another good interesting fun poem from your creative self.
Aw poor sow. she met her end by suey-cide how unfortunate, a great entry into the horror fying contest.

good luck Mary

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

Thanks for the luck, Mary but you're a little late.
I got lambasted in this contest.
Thanks for reading.

reply by Jackarrie on 25-Nov-2016

Well that is unusual for you, ah well better luck next time, Mar

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

Yeah...

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

I really liked your play on words. There is much information for a 5-7-5. However, I found it more humorous than horrifying. Now how nice was it to call your wife a sow? I guess that was pretty horrifying. I really liked it.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

The name "horror-fying" is humorous in and of itself.
Thanks for the comments.
~Dean

Comment from thonnigford09

Exceptional

Terrible Dean. reverse the roles please. No pun there. Happy thanksgiving and this was really terrifying in so few words . Did u ever see Elvira mistress of the dark. She had a really scary pig episode one time. Thx. Theresa. Excellent and I would recommend this.ð???

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Yeah, I used to watch Elvira all the time, Teresa.
Hey, thanks again for the read & review, and for the six stars too.
I'm glad you liked this.
Hope your Thanksgiving was a happy one.
~Dean

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Here, Piggy, Piggy! Reminds me that I've missed you Dean for the last five months. I have no idea how and where you come up with stuff that you come up with but, no question about it, you are the best! Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thank s.

reply by Dr. Nad on 24-Nov-2016

You are welcome.
Embrace the love from above.

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

U 2.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Jikes, Dean, this is seriously good and so funny in a macabre way. I absolutely love it and wish you the best of luck. Wonderful play with words. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thanks.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Exceptional

The fact that I've seen horror movies with pigs and hogs eating the remains of murdered people, gave this one extra punch. The picture was awesome. Loved the pun with suey cide. Great job. Funny and disturbing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thanks.

Comment from Oatmeal

Exceptional

Dean Kuch,

You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. You wrote this one very well. The artwork complemented your poem.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

The line count was within means.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thanks.