Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

A great contest entry with a great message. Your flow and rhyme work perfectly. It makes you think not only about your own actions but understanding the consequences of others behavior too.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thanks for these great words and review

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

The only real silver lining a person needs to know.

Reminds of my adage of "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary".

And, everything else will take care of itself.

Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thanks Brett for the great review

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The development from rhyming couplets in quatrain into a five line stanza containing a rhyming tercet followed by a rhyming couplet with the stanza summed up in a single short exhortation hadds a great deal to the form of this piece and acts as a heads up to the reader.



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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thanks Jim, I thought I'd removed it, maybe I didn't save it, and for the review

reply by Pantygynt on 20-Nov-2016

I have removed that comment as promised.

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you

Comment from Ryn

Excellent

Very well done. So true. Sometimes people can be unkind. We do not have to buy in to what we hear. Out Lord is our savior.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thanks for these great comments and review,