Comment from rockinm76233

Excellent

Beautiful explanation of the salvation that awaits all who care to partake. Only way to make it through this life it seems. I don't know how those that don't know Jesus survive. I truly don't.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks, for this great review, and lovely words,

Comment from Raoul D'Harmental

Excellent

Hi Anon,

This is a very apt entry into this contest and a very reassuring one too. Yes, vexation is an inevitable emotion we are all bound to experience usually at unguarded moment so it's always best to clap eyes on the silver lining though it may scarce be visible. Your poem is a sight-aid! Thanks for sharing and good luck. R

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks Raoul for this fabulous review,

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

This is a great entry for the contest. Your poem does describe how things really are in our world. I especially like your first stanza, it basically says it all. Good luck. Bill

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks Bill, , for this great review, and super comments.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

No matter what evils may befall, true Christians finds a silver lining in their faith in God and the divine order underlying this world and the universe beyond. This is a theme that suits the contest well and I wish you well in the judging.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks Tony, for these super comments and great review,

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a well-written poem for the contest silver lining. I know many do find the silver lining in Jesus. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

mary

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for this great review Marry,

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match to me
You captured my attention from the start. Those last few lines touched my heart.
Cookie

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks Cookie, for these great comments and great review,

reply by misscookie on 21-Nov-2016

It was my pleasure
Cookie

Comment from Thal1959

Exceptional

Excellent work, conforming perfectly to the contest's demands. Usually, I don't care much for a break in the structure of the poem as you have with, "Don't despair." But in this case, it works very well. It mimics a Haiku in that the first stanzas establish the theme - and then the abbreviated line acts like a segue into the last stanza that contrasts or flips the sentiment over. Very, very well done. Thanks.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks for these marvellous empathetic comments and great review

reply by Thal1959 on 21-Nov-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from LyricaLyre

Exceptional

Where do I begin??? I simply LOVED this poem, the way you conveyed a dark picture in my mind truly amazes me, as I have no visualization skills at all. I look forward to reading more of your works, and remember to keep on writing!!!!!!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks again for your very wonderful review and stars,

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

A superb message,maintain one's standards and conviction in times of seeming ill will. We do not need to drop our standards on account of another's immoral stance. This is clearly inspired by religious belief but it applies to everyone, even those not indoctrinated. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thank Joanna for these super comments and review

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I think this meets the requirements well for this contest, and it is also written in perfect meter and rhyme, so that should count for something. I especially enjoyed the second stanza... faith not built on sandy shores or river's silt is faith built on the solid Rock and that of course, will never collapse. Very good philosophy here... and a nice poem in which to share it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thanks Adonna for such a positive review and comments,