Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Teri, than you for the lovely thanksgiving poem. I do hope you will have a wonderful day with your family and little Greyson. Many blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thank you my friend! I wish the same for you too~ love you, Teri

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

From what I understand, end words cant rhyme and you cant use the same word twice.
Above you used twice.
Thanksgiving and laughing may pass
Soon and noon rhyme.

I could be wrong but mine was disqualified in a blank verse contest for these reason. I love the pictures

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Barb, Thank you for your help but I wrote it from my heart and this is what came to me. Thank you and Happy Thanksgiving. hugs, Teri

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 16-Nov-2016

Oh please go with it, I was just trying to help.

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thank you for your help my friend! hugs, Teri