There have been times
the darkest night57 total reviews
Comment from sandy montgomery
I have been there. First when I caught my first love cheating, second time when we learned we could not have children, and third when my mom died. There have been others but the point is these are the moments that stick with us. Those that change us for better or worse. You have captured that so eloquently in your poem. A piece to be remembered. Tucked away dogearred in a favorite book. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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I have been there. First when I caught my first love cheating, second time when we learned we could not have children, and third when my mom died. There have been others but the point is these are the moments that stick with us. Those that change us for better or worse. You have captured that so eloquently in your poem. A piece to be remembered. Tucked away dogearred in a favorite book. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi! Nice to meet you.
You've made me cry ... I'm touched that you've been touched.
I really needed this today. My husband is having a difficult day with his ALS. I can't always make him feel better. You've made me feel better.
Thank you.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You've certainly put these feelings down well. I am sure the majority of people will recognise your thoughts and feelings as some they have shared. This is a very good contest entry, well done, and good luck. :) Sandra xx
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You've certainly put these feelings down well. I am sure the majority of people will recognise your thoughts and feelings as some they have shared. This is a very good contest entry, well done, and good luck. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Sandra - thank you for your comments and encouragement.
And good to talk to you. I've been off FS for a number of months (family illness) and it's really good to be back.
God bless and my best,
Relda
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Nice to have you back too. I hope everyone is better now? Xxxx
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Currently Bud's (my husband's) ALS seems plateaued. His hands, arms and shoulders are gone - muscle wasted too nothing. However, the disease hasn't affected his breathing or swallowing yet, and his leg's are only slightly affected. Hopefully we'll be on this plateau for awhile.
ALS is totally unpredictable.
We're in good spirits.
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding interpretation for the contest, Relda. You have an excellent sense of "feelings" I think your poem stands a very good chance of einning in the competition. Good luck.. I will be rooting for you. blessings, Bob
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Outstanding interpretation for the contest, Relda. You have an excellent sense of "feelings" I think your poem stands a very good chance of einning in the competition. Good luck.. I will be rooting for you. blessings, Bob
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Bob, thank you for your review and encouragement.
And, nice talking to you again.
God bless and my best,
Relda
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Hi, Relda. It seems like forever. Have you been away? Bob
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My Bud has been having a really rough time (ALS) and though I've coped really well, haven't had the emotions (or the creative juices) to be on FS. Don't know how to explain ... made me cry when I signed on ... also couldn't listen to music for same reason. MAYO says ALS progression is totally unpredictable. Hope this plateau is a long one.
Relda
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Bless you both. sorry to hear that. Bob
Comment from Cedar
You have written a very emotional poem for this contest. Your words describe feelings that many of us can relate to. For some, life and love comes easy. But, for others, it can be a constant struggle. Good luck. Take care. Bill
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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You have written a very emotional poem for this contest. Your words describe feelings that many of us can relate to. For some, life and love comes easy. But, for others, it can be a constant struggle. Good luck. Take care. Bill
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi! So good to talk to you again.
Thank you for your encouragement.
God bless and my best,
Relda
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You're very welcome Relda. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from RoostyNester
I liked your emotion poem. Yes, we do all see pain and emotion in different ways. If you face it and deal with it, then sometimes it will make your stronger. Your poem expressed deep hurt and showed feelings. Well done in style and verse.
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I liked your emotion poem. Yes, we do all see pain and emotion in different ways. If you face it and deal with it, then sometimes it will make your stronger. Your poem expressed deep hurt and showed feelings. Well done in style and verse.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi - Thanks for your comments and encouragement.
Have a wonderful day.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from judester
You have captured the essence of depression is so few words. The thought of never being happy again is a common thread. Things that used to bring us joy, now makes us sad... sigh. Bravo and good luck with the contest. judester
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You have captured the essence of depression is so few words. The thought of never being happy again is a common thread. Things that used to bring us joy, now makes us sad... sigh. Bravo and good luck with the contest. judester
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi! So good to talk to you.
Thank you for the insight, comments and encouragement.
Have a great day.
Relda
Comment from MelB
Hi Relda, you did a great job with the feelings prompt. The pain and hurt are deep in this poem. I can relate to past times and the darkness felt.
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Hi Relda, you did a great job with the feelings prompt. The pain and hurt are deep in this poem. I can relate to past times and the darkness felt.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi! So good to talk to you again.
Thanks for the encouragement.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Relda, an excellent writing prompt entry with the thought provoking lines intermingled with your very poignant feelings. I wish you good luck in this contest,,,,,,,Jim
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Relda, an excellent writing prompt entry with the thought provoking lines intermingled with your very poignant feelings. I wish you good luck in this contest,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Hi, Jim. It's nice to meet you.
Thank you so much for your review and encouragement.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Irish Rain
Very strong emotional poem, excellent entry for this contest. I like how the font is so big, makes the emotions huge...very clever...blessings...
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Very strong emotional poem, excellent entry for this contest. I like how the font is so big, makes the emotions huge...very clever...blessings...
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for your review and comments.
Contests are such fun. They push me to try to write more concisely.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from nomi338
According to the bible book of romans, chapter 2 and verse 15, we are excused or even accused by our own thoughts. That is because our thoughts are rarely in harmony with God's thoughts. So often when we are ready to throw in the towel God says, "Not yet." I don't know about you but I am so happy that this is so, otherwise I would have given up so many years ago and missed out seventy three wonderful years of life. My only words for you are to hang tough and for God's sake and ours, keep right on writing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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According to the bible book of romans, chapter 2 and verse 15, we are excused or even accused by our own thoughts. That is because our thoughts are rarely in harmony with God's thoughts. So often when we are ready to throw in the towel God says, "Not yet." I don't know about you but I am so happy that this is so, otherwise I would have given up so many years ago and missed out seventy three wonderful years of life. My only words for you are to hang tough and for God's sake and ours, keep right on writing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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You are so right. Know Jesus has the rope in his hand, tie a knot on your end, and don't let go.
When I beat myself up for getting down from time-to-time, I go back to Psalms. Those writers knew about depression as well as joy!
God bless and my best,
Relda
