Cloud Shadows
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The mem'ries come light painted thought
While knowing that we both once cared
just two suggestions to make the flow even. Excellent descriptions and ease in reading makes this a very thoughtful piece.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2016
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The mem'ries come light painted thought
While knowing that we both once cared
just two suggestions to make the flow even. Excellent descriptions and ease in reading makes this a very thoughtful piece.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2016
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Dear Barb, Darling do you EVER sleep? It seems as though the minute I post you are right on it. It is 2.45 pm where I am in Australia , what time is it where you are ? I spend an inordinate amount of time pecking away on the keyboard, it is a compulsion to read reviews on my work.And then respond!! Thanks for your review and the five stars. One suggestion I have followed and in so doing found an error, so thanks for that. I truly value your comments and appreciate your time and effort .Cheers Cass
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I work night shift and it is now 12:45 am
